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| Alexithimia 2008-06-13 ch 6,  | abuseHave you read "Tuesday's Gone" by Nevianna? Because in her story Faye's name is Kennedy, however, she gets that name through marriage. Heh, I just found it really interesting that you gave her the same name, esp. if you have not read that story. Onto my review of the chapter... Very good, I liked this chapter a lot, it was in way, kinda cute. And as always, well written, and please don't be done with these, I thrive off of stories like these |
| Alexithimia 2008-05-08 ch 4, anon. | abuseleft me a little confused...but that's okay. Update soon! |
| Taking Thursday 2008-05-03 ch 3, | abuseVery nice. I loved the way Ed described everyone, especially Spike (we all know he's a big softie deep down). Ooh, there's a little typing error in your first chapter, I think your word processor or somthing must have scrambled up, because "finally left" has transformed into "fnally ileft". I really liked the title to this fic, too. It stood out to me. Well done, keep going. I'll put you on my author alert list. |
| Alexithimia 2008-05-01 ch 3, | abuseI liked your perspective into Ed's thoughts |
| Alexithimia 2008-04-26 ch 2, | abuseSo far the only thing I can find wrong with this is that there isn't more. I liked this allot and I will look forward to the next chapter and I hope that it's longer |
| Kimi the Great 2008-04-15 ch 1, | abuseOh, I like it! :D |