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| Hellzz-on-Earth 2008-06-29 ch 2, | abuseI totally dig these characters. I know they aren't together on the show, but I love to read the fics about them. Can't wait for more. |
| Ms. Snarky 2008-05-21 ch 2, | abuseI just read chapters 1 & 2 and must say they were great! I love how you gave us a peak into their minds and emotions! Jack is a hard one to read at times but I think you did that beautifully and very well done! I look forward to reading more. |
| krjemb 2008-04-30 ch 1, | abuseBeautiful start. I feel so bad for Carly. |
| GrayRainbows 2008-04-17 ch 1, | abuseI like it! my only suggestion is to spell-check, because I noticed a word here and there that needed fixing. Very, very nice descriptions of the sunset. I don't know why I read this, really, because I haven't even watched ATWT since 2003! This makes me want to tune in, again, but I know I'd be hopelessly lost if I did. I loved Jack and Carly together, though (and Carly/Mike before that. *sigh*) , so I enjoyed your story, anyway. I hope you'll write more; it's a great first effort! Thank you for sharing. |
| Horsewhisper 2008-04-15 ch 1, | abuseVery Good! Very well done...I like your writing style! Please keep it coming! Always, -Horsewhisper |