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Reviews For: Sunrise, Sunset

Hellzz-on-Earth
2008-06-29
ch 2,
abuseI totally dig these characters. I know they aren't together on the show, but I love to read the fics about them. Can't wait for more.
Ms. Snarky
2008-05-21
ch 2,
abuseI just read chapters 1 & 2 and must say they were great! I love how you gave us a peak into their minds and emotions! Jack is a hard one to read at times but I think you did that beautifully and very well done! I look forward to reading more.
krjemb
2008-04-30
ch 1,
abuseBeautiful start. I feel so bad for Carly.
GrayRainbows
2008-04-17
ch 1,
abuseI like it! my only suggestion is to spell-check, because I noticed a word here and there that needed fixing.

Very, very nice descriptions of the sunset.

I don't know why I read this, really, because I haven't even watched ATWT since 2003! This makes me want to tune in, again, but I know I'd be hopelessly lost if I did. I loved Jack and Carly together, though (and Carly/Mike before that. *sigh*) , so I enjoyed your story, anyway. I hope you'll write more; it's a great first effort! Thank you for sharing.
Horsewhisper
2008-04-15
ch 1,
abuseVery Good! Very well done...I like your writing style! Please keep it coming!
Always,
-Horsewhisper
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