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| AJAX087 2008-09-25 ch 1,  | abuseGREAT STORIES BEEN READIN FOR A WHILE PLEESE UPDATE |
| HAL-9001 2008-09-10 ch 10, | abuseAh ha ha ha! When will Ackerson and the rest of ONI learn to stop messing with Laura!? They keep trying to pin her down, and she keeps slipping through, and pwning them in the face as she does so! Except now ONI can try and get Laura through Samuel and Kelly. They will probably have ONI all over them, and John, too. |
| Mhop12 2008-09-10 ch 10, | abuseTwas good, tho short :D - Just Cause i'm not reviewing, doesn't mean i'm dead ;) |
| HAL-9001 2008-09-05 ch 9, | abuseOh, yes, Laura's old friends in the ONI. I guess, now that she's back, they'll be a thorn in her side again. She's in real trouble if they figure out that she has a whole other person's memories inside her head -- it would give them an excuse to have her incarcerated (mental instability) and a reason to interrogate her -- they could gain any knowledge that Alaya had, and use it in weapons. I hope to see more of Laura and John's children (Sam and Kelly, I think). They've been rather absent so far. Of course, ONI's probably making their lives painful any way they can. |
| general MB 2008-08-28 ch 8, | abuseman i want that dick Arnyris to be humiliated, he is a smug **. good chapter update soon |
| Rapier-3 2008-08-28 ch 8, | abuse...I'm losing patiences with that kid...how much more asinine can Arnyris get? other then that, excellent work as always and glad you're still about. Keep it up! :: salutes :: |
| HAL-9001 2008-08-28 ch 8, | abuseArnyris got pwnd in the face! Hopefully Arisaya will find a way to help Laura control her borrowed memories. I have been impressed with your work so far, and would be glad to see more of it! |
| Mhop12 2008-08-28 ch 8, | abuselol, Arisaya Got pwned XD -Well written, Just PleasePleasePleasePlease find more time for the fanfictions :D Anywho, off to your KOTOR FF :D |
| Manus Manus of Deus 2008-08-27 ch 8, | abuseYAY! Glad to see that you're back, and I look forward to future stories and updates... keep up the good work!! |
| general MB 2008-08-24 ch 1, | abusethis is a good sequel and i like the whole identity crisis laura is going through, i hope this story turns out as good as the first one update soon |
| Sky66 2008-07-08 ch 7, | abuseI don't know what to say ... your first one made a bit more sense in POV, description of surroundings, and character. But this one is just a bit ... um, confusing in understanding what happens after Halo: The Secret Spartan. In other words just try to review one's story and see if one can also fit the two fanfics together. (This review is not made to be a flame, just criticism.) Though do keep the great work up and update. -Sky66 |
| Rapier-3 2008-06-18 ch 7, | abuse...and how long ago did I submit a review...? ehe...sorry -.-; Anywho, I'm defiantly looking forward the next update, though I will state that I am going to chase you with defib paddles if you turn Laura into a schizo, jk ^_^ As always, excellent writing. Keep it up! :: salutes :: |
| dansa 2008-06-03 ch 6, | abuseYay the sequel is up . I loved the first story , Laura is definitely one of my most favorite original characters. Update soon |
| Mhop12 2008-05-29 ch 6, | abusewoo its back :P Slow interwebs? I feel so sorry :P Or did you forget about us? -.- I'll be waiting for the next chapter =D |
| Mhop12 2008-05-19 ch 5, | abuseYeah... about that requests up top? i got one :P PLEASE, PLEASE WRITE :D Its a good fanfic :P |