that was beautiful -sniff- pure art if you ask me and one of the bestest dark fanfics i have ever read -sniff-

Hey, this didn't turn out too bad. I don't think it's a bad attempt at a dark fic. The shadow wasn't as thick, I guess because you're used to writing more lighthearted fics, but it wasn't too bad. Was the deer at the end supposed to symbolize Sasuke, or was it simply a deer that has no meaning in the story? Anyway, nice fic! :)

I loved it!
it was alittle depressing, but it was well writen!

-sniff-... That is so beautiful... :') I love this so very much! I'm definitely faving it and adding it to the C2 Archives!

ouch .. that was dark .. I loved it :)

i don't get the ending. was the deer important?

anywya, i like this. but that might be becuase even though i am a happy person, some of my friends say i am very dark and depressing.

anyway, update your other stories soon!

GOOD STORY!

Aww... So sad, but I love it. :') I almost cried! X.X This is what you put for Denise? Amazing job. :D In case you're curious, I sent 'What About Me?' and my two Akatsuki oneshots to her. Anyways, no wonder you made it. Ja! ^.^ - Cady Ps. Poor dear and poor Sakura! T.T

*Snifles* I cried...it was very good. It may seem strange of me to say but...it was beautiful...

You really need to work on that self-esteem issue of yours. Either that or have higher expectations. It was really good! Itachi seems a bit too cruel though... Eh... it still fit. I liked it!
~ ♥Tsuki-chan

Oh, by the way. I'm trying to make a SasuSaku fic but I want a good plot. I was wondering if you or anyone that reads this, actually, could PM me some of your ideas. I want to make my first submitted fanfic a good one. Thanks! ♥ ☺

Awesome Dude!!

HELLO BESTEST BUDDY! STOP DEGRADING YOURSELF MAN. Everybody knows you write good stuff. Super nice stuff :D

Simply beautiful, yet creepy and horrific. Great job!

you think way to lowly of yourself hikari i mean seriously if you like sasusaku better thats good for you(and me) but if you have a knack for writing other pairings like this one then thats all up to you if you post it or not. Also, great story even though i'm not a fan of this pairing i read it cause you write good stories so keep updating and what not on your other stories and no one will care. I bet the reviews you've gotten or are getting are gonna be something like "don't be down i really like this story" well let me be one of the first to say it. Really it was an awesome story.

what is the piece of **? You suck!







Just kidding LOL

Well honestyly that was great but really really REALLY scary. My god i was like wow... and than how he killed that baby deer i was like OMFG!

hehe great story plz do more but try and make em a little more happy.

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