| Reviews for Tears from the Lost Souls |
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Saskue's-Killer112 7/2/09 . chapter 8i'm sorry to say this but PLEASE! UPDATE! THIS STORY SOON!*-* *huf huff huff* okay sorry for screaming that but please i waited so long |
iEspeon 7/1/08 . chapter 1Oh, gosh, the best part about this chapter is when Kenya is talking back to the demon like that. xD |
iEspeon 6/30/08 . chapter 4Oh gosh. The demon in Konai is funny with that line to me. Hell no! If I knew I'd tell you. Just cracks me up how the demon is so frank about it. |
Hitorimono 5/31/08 . chapter 8It's okay. Everyone needs breaks from stuff. Just remember that shit happens. It happens to the best of people, the worst of people, and everything in between. Don't beat yourself up about something that's out of your control. Update when you want to. Rushing things when you feel awful doesn't help your state of mind. I hope things get better for you. |
ALPHA DRAGONESS 5/18/08 . chapter 8 Dimunda i know truly and honestly you want the Snow Clan to stay and i would allow that but the...the Main House told me the only way to get the Snow Clan back is show all the other clans you are more good hearted then they think and i will halp you (secretly) how about this me and my clan stay in the Snow Clan's place until the story is finshed because if i gide you through this story the Main House will just beg you to take the Snow Clan because i know what they like so just follow me and i will guide little sister BELIVE IT! . I also cant belive that um...forget i was going there well geeze...well anyways like i said follow me i promise the Heavan Clan will get you to the Snow Clan . Did you also mean that you are really typing any kind of story in the summer wuwe well goodbye and let us know what you think of are offer . |
MistyDragoness 5/8/08 . chapter 7 Hi Leader or Future Leader Dimunda forgive me for desterbing you but please i know you desire a break but until SUMMER COME ON THE SNOW ANIMAL CLAN IS DRIVING MY MISTY CLAN CRAZY PLEASE WRITE ANOTHER AUTHORS NOTE! . Uh...sorry for yelling but they just want to make sure your okay and they missed giveing you ideas and they constently ingore other of out clans they will not act without your command its going to bring our honor down the drain please . Well theres just one thing sence Snow Griffen the creative one of the clan sence she refuses to talk she wanted me to tell you this idea its was for the story 'IF' you consider the story heres what happened in one of the chapters Lee over brushes his teeth and when he opens his mouth to yell at Neji then PINNG he blinds Neji badly and when Neji screams in pain he mistakly pops TenTen's ears and now she is deaf and then Byuakuganna and Hinata walk by and Hinata sees Neji with his arms out infront of him trieing to feal his way around and TenTen has her right hand to her ear and she is screaming WHAT DID YOU SAY NEJI! and that lee has his headband tied around his mouth so his teeth wont make things worse . Well you see Neji does not know of the 10 tailed white tiger Byakuganna but now Neji must know that his cousin is a demoness . Well one more thing they have to travel to a secret spring and it will heal any bad injuries so Byakuganna and Hinata is there only hope now and one of the funny parts is that when Neji was trieing to find his tent he mistakly went into TenTen's tent then he trips over something and he fall on top of TenTen they were kissing each other then what Neji did next was unexpected for some reason he knew it was TenTen and he always wanted to kiss tenten . So when Neji kissed deeper he wrapped his arms around her and poor TenTen she liked it but it was to sudden when she tried to squirm free Neji felt it and he pulled her closer and then Lee and Gai see this and they run into the tent and Lee screams NEJI YOU FINALY GOT THE YOUTHFUL FLOWER'S KISS I AM SO PROUD! and they both started to cry . Well tell us what you think of that part well goodbye . |
Snow Griffen 5/4/08 . chapter 7 Hey Leader Dimunda i just stoped buy to let you know that idea that Snow Lioness told you about please dont use it you can just keep on considering the first idea because the other idea was just a um...thought yeah i was just planning . Well goodbye . .p.s that is the last time i tell Snow Lioness about a idea that is not really a idea . |
Snow Griffen 5/4/08 . chapter 7 Hey Leader Dimunda i just stoped buy to let you know that idea that Snow Lioness told you about please dont use it you can just keep on considering the first idea because the other idea was just a um...thought yeah i was just planning . Well goodbye . .p.s that is the last time i tell Snow Lioness about a idea that is not really a idea . |
SNOW LIONESS 5/1/08 . chapter 7 DIMUNDA DIMUNDA DIMUNDA GUESS WHAT SNOW GRIFFEN CAME UP WITH GREAT IDEA FOR YOU ITS ALOTE BETTER THEN THE FIRST ONE AND IT IS FUNNY! . Well heres what happens okay sorry i got the giggles i will just spit it out okay Deidara gets married to someone and that someone is a 10 tailed blue wolf demon and her name is Sikyua . Well after Deidara found out he was going to be a father while his wife was giveing birth she died so the docters cut her chest open and removed the offspring from her heart but right when Deidara so his child his wife was dead you see Sikyua didnt exactly tell her husband that her life as a demoness was comeing to a end because her father shortend her life so she had only 30 full years of her life well when she gave birth it happened to be that time and man Deidara was in tears . So the doctors were in the emergancy room trieing to bring his daughter to life then one of the doctors told Deidara that she dead so before Deidara to cry anymore he heared a wimper that sounded like a puppy and right there in front of him was his daughter . So that was the first part so here is how it goes the daughter is named Silyen she is a 16 tailed wolf she is a white color also the top of her head and her ears,back,and the top part of her tails are all a dark blue color and her stomach,face,lower neck,and the bottom of her tailes are a stunning white color . Silyen's personality is like this she is calm,very very very smart,clever,dosent have a temper,and the fact that she just loves her dad and does not let anything happen to him . Also Deidara is really way over protective of Silyen,ever sence the death of his wife he could not live without Silyen also considering she is his only family . Well thats it let us know whats you think okay bye Leader Dimunda . |
MistyBuffillow 4/28/08 . chapter 7 Greetings i love this story it really suits our Clans Names . Well i hope we can build a great bond with you like the Snow Clan . I also see you meet my two sisters they are cool MistyDragoness is very challenging she likes to start a fight she will listen and take no for a answer and she can be hard headed at times but she is nice . Now MistyTigeress is a diffrent story she is like the oppisite of Snow Lioness she is a little more opned minded doesnt lie and she will i repeat 'WILL' bluret out secrets if she is not told not to so yeah you have to tell her what to do . So update soon so we can talk more okay alrighty bye . |
MistyTigeress 4/27/08 . chapter 7 WO NEAT STEOY I AM IMPRESSED! . Well like Snow Lioness i am the second oldest of this crazy Mist Clan but we actually come from the vilage hidden amoge the fog village because Mist was already used . Well i see you had a (cough) TUFF promblem going on but i will be nice and not metion it i dont want to offend my futurer Master of the Mist Clan if you want to except . Dimunda you are popular through are familys name every clan that is related to us wants to have there turn with you but we all cant review we must take turns . Sence the Snow Clan were the first ones to become your family and they were already the head-honchoes of the clans already they said we all want to make Dimunda there leader and want to be her reviewers as well so here is how we seatle it the clan leaders will write the name of there clans and put it in a shoe bow then Snow Dragon will pull out a tiny peice of paper and she will call out the name of the clan and that clan will become your new reviewers and guess what we one this time . Well that is one secret you learened just another 5,0,0 secrets to go but dont worry they are not bad just traits and personalitys and stuff well toodles hoped this information helped HAHAHA LONG LIVE QUEEN DIMUNDA THE EAGLE OF US ALL YEAH! . |
MistyDragoness 4/27/08 . chapter 7 HI I LOVE THIS STORY YOU ARE A NICE AUTHOR! . Well i will get down to the buisness we are here for you we are the new clan for you . Huh allow me to explain we are known as the Misty Clan we come from the village hidden in the Mist (isint it obvious) well i am the Top-Dog or Cheif of this Clan but i prefier to be called the Top-Dog . Me and my cousin Snow Dragon keep the peace between our clan and there (counting me) only 2 girls and stuff . Well it appereas maybe just maybe you get a new clan once every 3 storys just like the dragon sisters BUT dont worry i dont think that the snow animal clan are done reviewing for you dont worry . Well i think you are only going to see me and my sister in this story but you will meet my brothers soon okay well toodles Leader Dimunda Rain Eagle (rain is close in the middle of Mist and Snow) well toodles . |
SNOW DRAGON 4/25/08 . chapter 7 Thank you Leader Dimunda we are so reliefed i am so happy . Hey Leader Dimunda me and my family are making a YouTube video it is really funny we are thinking about calling it The Hyuuga clan's new member its about Byakuganna and Hinata and the rest of the Hyuuga clan and it shows them running around and it even shows Hanabi and Byakuganna going around the hyuuga manner and it shows these diffrent pictures like Neji in the shower and Hinata drooling in her sleep and Hinata's father falling alseep while secretly reading that perveted book Kakashie is always reading and the last one shows Byakuganna actually putting a retainer on her teeth before she went to bed . And at the end it shows pictures of are animals . Well goodbye . |
Rikku Madara Uchiha 4/25/08 . chapter 7Everyone BETTER understand. I think you push yourself too hard. You deserve a break. Fuck anyone who has a problem with that. Take care of yourself, okay? BTW, how have you been? |
Snow Griffen 4/25/08 . chapter 6 Hey Leader Dimunda its okay it is not your fault nor mine its nobodys fault please belive me . Well i hope you are not going to be mad at me but i was thinking would you um...li like to write another story (smiles sheepishly and rubs the back of the head) i probly am chaniging the subject but you see i was writing a story that was really popular but my computer erasid it all and there was no way i was going to rewrite so then i thought hey what about Dimunda im sure she wouldnt mind . Well if you want to do it here is what it is about okay its about Hinata and the hyuuga clan okay there is some diffucluties between the Hyuuga clan and someother clan well there was only one person who could fix that and that was Lianata A.K.A Hinata Hyuuga's mother also there was a demoness inside her this demon was a black tiger demoness with 7 tails and when Hanabi hinata's little sister was born Linata died so did the demoness . But inside Hinata was the daughter of the demoness her name is Byakuganna she is a 8 tailed tiger she has white fur with white/purple colored strips and she and Hinata weild the most powerful Byuakugan the world has ever known . So in the story Byakuganna was born inside Hinata but when Hinata lets Byakuganna out all the time but when Byakuganna is on the outside there are 6 white chakra strings conecting from her chest to hinata's chest so they share each others pains and powers and Byakuganna is a very nice and good hearted soul she is a true member of the Hyuuga clan and she and Hanabi always go around and take pictures of the other members of the clan . But it is a little diffuclt because those 6 chakra strings can only strech to a good 10-feet long so Hinata and Byakuganna cant be seperated . In one of the chapters Hanbi and Byakuganna take a camra and take a picture of Neji in the shower and they sell it to fangirls . Hahahahaha! so what do you think i hope you like it just let me know okay and remeber its not your fault it never was BELIVE IT! . |