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Tora Minamino 2008-07-19 ch 4,	abuseI think this story has made me a fan of YamamotoxHaru. I don't think anyone's OOC, and you also did a great job of including humor. I laughed quite a bit at parts.
E.M. Nemesis 2008-07-10 ch 4,	abuseAh, I loved this chapter. It is nice to hear from you again! This instalment, especially at the end, got quite morose. Poor Haru! She will not let anyone help her! And her confrontation with Yamamoto was nail-biting! The story has only been getting better, so I'll be waiting anxiously for your next chapter!
Garowyn 2008-07-10 ch 4,	abuseI've got tons and tons of fan fics to catch up on, but I always make time for stories by friends. ^_^ This new chapter inspires me to keep working on my own Reborn fics, as I've been jumping from one fandom to the next, and so on. The Yamamoto and Haru argument bit was great, and it's always good to see our favorite characters display other emotions than what we just see in the show. They are human (super human. . .) after all. And the part with Hibari is just plain awesome. :D I wonder why he was there, hmm? Guess I'll have to wait and find out. Great work, as usual! Keep it up.
TimeOfNight 2008-05-25 ch 3,	abusethat wuz great! luved yamaxharu!
TimeOfNight 2008-05-25 ch 1,	abusetheir already in their first year of high school in the manga and hibari is in his second year ...but they started out as middle school...i think namimori is a highschool/milddl school colided...
ThatGirlNxtDoor 2008-05-22 ch 3,	abuseDefinitely one of the better KHR! fics out there. I don't believe the characters are OOC, but do be careful still. Plus, nice HaruxYama here. Can't wait for you to update soon! :]
syntic 2008-05-01 ch 3,	abuseI'm glad you're finally making a multi-chapter fic for the couple. : D Haru's really intense in this chapter (with the costumes, and the director thing)... not that its bad or anything, but it got carried away a bit, making it feel OOC. Oh wells, nothing I can't handle of course. : ) The tad-bits on the other characters were perfectly fine; gave me quite a chuckle. Please keep up the great work (this couple needs you)! @ Anon: Please, if anything, just get your name spelled correctly. Couldn't you have reworded your critique more elegantly? And the eye roll gesture was absolutely unnecessary.
lizzieliz 2008-04-28 ch 1,	abuseI can't wait for the next chapter!
Gambatte 2008-04-26 ch 3, anon.	abuseAh, I love HaruxYama! Keep up the lovely work!
kasumi 2008-04-24 ch 3, anon.	abuseGreat chapter. And Ryohei was one HECK of an EXTREME person! I liked the way how you wrote his dialogues. Very funny. And last not but not the least--> Yamamoto x Haru is the best. Continue updating please. :D
Anonymouse 2008-04-22 ch 3, anon.	abuseeyeroll I'm not even touching the OOCness and other random bits that made little sense. But, 'aniki' means 'older brother'. The word you're going for is 'aneki'. Please, if you really feel you MUST throw in Fangirl Japanese, at least try to get it right.
Bleaked 2008-04-21 ch 3,	abuseyey! multi-chaptered yamaharu! hehe nice incorporation of Tsuna there with the parenthesis and the perfect prince=brother.
E.M. Nemesis 2008-04-20 ch 3,	abuseAnother wonderful chapter! My favorite part was when Ryohei burst through the door with his "extreme" accusations. Haru took care of him though, didn't she? I would have loved to see her get into it with him and Gokudera when they started screwing up her set! I don't know why, but now that you have written her more, Kyoko seems so extremely cute! I am no longer annoyed with her! XD
Garowyn 2008-04-20 ch 3,	abuseis all giddy Absolutely loved the ending scene, no doubts there. You're making great progress, and I laughed at Gokudera's unfortunate situation, both with recitation and Ryouhei. Keep it up!
one99five 2008-04-20 ch 1,	abuseyea im pretty sure thats rite school system (sry 4 bad grammar... im supposed 2 b asleep n im rushing =P)

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