Hee hee hee...great descriptions, snappy dialogue, and a premise you certainly don't see every day.

LOL! Pretty darned funny! Wonder what the other Decepticons would have to say about that though.

Ok, I'm a bit confused about Dart being a Decepticon if she has blue optics, but other than that, this was side splitting, tears down the face funny. Great job.

Great story! I quite like that Deuce character and the idea of Transofmers tobogganing on Mt. Fuji on a regular basis makes me laugh.

I've never come across Deuce and/or Dart before, but already I love them both. Especially Deuce million-a-minute mouth.