I definitely didn't see that coming!! At first I thought-oh red eyes, that must mean that Bella is still a newborn. But then I remembered that it was set during Twilight. And then Victoria said: James. It took me a couple of seconds to realize who said that. ;D
I bet that happened to a lot of other readers!!

Wow. Totally shocking ending. I had no clue who the heck you were writing about until the end! Amazing!

Wow. Beautiful. So much passion and love. Excellent work!

This was a great story from James prespective about Victoria.

I didn't expect it to be James and Victoria. It's nice to see them portrayed as something other than villans. :)

that was genious! i would have NEVER thought it was victoria/james!! i thought it was bella/edward

okai u have so got to mention the fact that this is a vxj oneshot insted of letting us think it was a bxe
at least mention in your summary

AW! I loved this, I could really picture them being romantic together just like this, more or less at times too, but just like this. Awsome job!

Wow, I totally missed the point of that one. All that firy hair and everything, and I still thought it was some kind of post breaking dawn Bella/Edward. I feel slow. Heh. Then I got to the "James" bit and I was all like, wait, what? Lol. Very good though. Even though I'm reading this while baking cookies with my little sister, so it's kinda awkward...

I love your stories.

amazingly written

LOL you know that I didn't know that it was about James and Victoria until the word James came up in the end? I was completely oblivious!

ew James and victoria? very well written.

OMG, I've never seen a James/Victoria fic but I loved this.

im confused... y did she say james?

Wow. Didn't see that one comming. Bravo