Nice. You really captured Ted.

It was so incredibly refreshing to read a 'Life' story where the characters were actually *in character*! Kudos on that. You pulled it with great success.

Ted's POV was absolutely brilliant. I laughed at the Batman-Alfred bit in the last chapter. And you managed to keep it in the realm of believable but slightly kooky, which is exactly what the show does. Even Crews, who's so distinctive with his dialogue and his mental flashes, was really amazing to read.

There are a few problems with the grammar and structure of your sentences, especially towards the end, but that has more to do with presentation than the story itself. It would be great to see it cleaned up, and a few minor things fixed, but as a good friend said once- 'even if you dictated this thing to a six-year-old using a broken keyboard, I'd still read it'.

So thank you. This fic really made my day. ^_^

Have I told you before how much I liked this story? Haven't I?...I cannot remember...:-/
anyways...I liked your story! ^_^

are you planning to write some more? (pleasee??^^)

Big, juicy orange for you for writing this! Straight out of Charlie's orange grove!

I know I'm starting to sound repititious and redundant, but another great story. I can really see Ted living the high life as an inside trader, then hitting rock bottom. I love how you portray Charlie helping pull him out of the hole, and his edginess when Constance and Dani are together.

THIS WAS EXCELLENT! I WILL THEREFORE NOT SHARE A FRUIT, BUT GIVE YOU AN ORCHARD AND WILL BURY YOU IN FRUIT!

Really, this was an excellent story! Please write more TED! He's adorable!

I really enjoyed your Ted in this story. There's really not enough of him out there in fiction, but the dynamic he and Charlie have and the background they share is so very interesting. I love the thought of Charlie protecting Ted throughout their prison years and Ted just knowing what Charlie can do.

Very, very good!

That was fantastic. Great exploration of character interactions without getting bogged down in too much detail - truly excellent work :)

Hope you post more or at least more for "Life" - your style and characterisations are superb!

I loved it, there aren't a lot of fics foccused on Ted, and it was nice to see all those little Dani moments, because sh'es simply awesome! ^.^

"“If you say I’m Robin," she pointed, "I’m going to start throwing punches. And I do not want an image of Crews in tights.” She winced, “Dammit, too late.” “I think I’ll look good in tights.”" --» lmao, this is awesome! :P

Bye ;)
Su