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Lucathia Rykatu
2009-11-22 . chapter 9
I enjoy the alternating Shuuichi POVs. The younger Shuuichi is completely terrified and doesn't know what's going on, while Kurama is just trying to understand his younger brother. I really like the title and hope we'll get to see how these 20 hours will play out!
Thunderstorm101
2009-11-14 . chapter 9
Oh, very nice.

I'm looking forward to the next chapter.
oceanabyss
2009-11-13 . chapter 9
This is so cool! I love the concept with Shuichi!
I can't wait to read more, I want to know who kidnapped him!
keep up the good work!
-Bre
bp
2009-11-10 . chapter 9
Whoa, This is actually pretty good. Good job! Everyone's in character too.
Aurora Hargreaves
2009-10-24 . chapter 9
I can't wait to read what happens next...
Death101- Fox Version
2009-10-24 . chapter 9
I loved Shizuru's two cents. It was very helpful for Kurama. Anyways, awesome job! Please update soon!
-D101
Dark Hearted Shinobi
2009-10-23 . chapter 9
Yay! An update! Can't wait to see what happens next.
loretta537
2009-10-23 . chapter 9
thank you for the update, this is a great story
arthel
2009-09-06 . chapter 8
Aww so short D: Well at least there was an update :D Hurry up Kurama! I wanna see you kick ass XD
Aurora Hargreaves
2009-09-06 . chapter 8
I loved this story! I can't wait to read what happens next.
Death101- Fox Version
2009-09-06 . chapter 8
Wow. He's about to die and yet he is still thinking about a chick and getting his older step-brother into trouble. Fun. Awesome job! Please update soon!
-d101
Dark Hearted Shinobi
2009-09-06 . chapter 8
Wow. Interesting story here. I can't wait to see how it turns out.
arthel
2009-07-01 . chapter 7
I wonder who kidnapped Shuiichi... Please write more soon :D I love your story.
peppymint
2009-06-22 . chapter 7
Great chapter. Please update as soon as you can.
nami
2009-06-21 . chapter 7
please update soon it is so good
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