I enjoy the alternating Shuuichi POVs. The younger Shuuichi is completely terrified and doesn't know what's going on, while Kurama is just trying to understand his younger brother. I really like the title and hope we'll get to see how these 20 hours will play out!

Oh, very nice.

I'm looking forward to the next chapter.

This is so cool! I love the concept with Shuichi!
I can't wait to read more, I want to know who kidnapped him!
keep up the good work!
-Bre

Whoa, This is actually pretty good. Good job! Everyone's in character too.

I can't wait to read what happens next...

I loved Shizuru's two cents. It was very helpful for Kurama. Anyways, awesome job! Please update soon!
-D101

Yay! An update! Can't wait to see what happens next.

thank you for the update, this is a great story

Aww so short D: Well at least there was an update :D Hurry up Kurama! I wanna see you kick ass XD

I loved this story! I can't wait to read what happens next.

Wow. He's about to die and yet he is still thinking about a chick and getting his older step-brother into trouble. Fun. Awesome job! Please update soon!
-d101

Wow. Interesting story here. I can't wait to see how it turns out.

I wonder who kidnapped Shuiichi... Please write more soon :D I love your story.

Great chapter. Please update as soon as you can.

please update soon it is so good