I absolutely loved this! I don't know why, but something about it just really touches me. If you get another idea like this, please write it; I'd love to read more. Kudos!

very good, i like it

I like this story :D

it has this thing in it that makes me want to remember this for eternity ;D

hope you make more great stories!!

Wow. Very introspective and very... Shika-like? The bit with Tsunade makes sense tho

wow that was good ^^ i likey ^^ i'd have to say it was definitly worth my time! ^^