 maji343 2009-05-05 . chapter 3like it so far |
 oajna 2008-04-30 . chapter 1Sounds interesting, please continue! I hope Allison appears sometime soon too. |
 john bender 59 2008-04-21 . chapter 1is this going to be continued? because it comes across pretty pointless as it is... |
 Helenahandcart 2008-04-16 . chapter 1 Oh too short, I was getting into it and you stopped, so hope you are going to update really soon hint hint |
 An-Outlaw-A-Lady 2008-04-16 . chapter 1Ha! I like it. You've got the whole teenage boy obscenities and buddy talk down pat :D Keep writing! I want to see where this goes! :D :D :D :D |