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| Pika-Safire 2008-08-16 ch 1,  | abusei love this! the creepy devotion and skewed love- thanks for sharing! |
| A Very Neat Monster 2008-08-15 ch 1, | abuseGreat job... I think you really capture Rudy's voice and show the twisted logic of his devotion to Dexter. Great insight into one of my favorite Dexter moments. :-) |
| Silent Sage 2008-07-01 ch 1, | abuseI think you captured Brian's twisted love for Dexter perfectly. The last sentence just captured the story's essence in a haunting and fitting way. |
| Alien Altered 2008-06-21 ch 1, | abuseAw... I love it! Great work. I really like the character Biney/Brian/Rudy - true he is majorly messed up, but I still love him. Thanks for writing this it's amazing. However there was one line that didn't quite make sense about half way through. Still, AWESOME! |
| The Bell and the Black Drag... 2008-06-07 ch 1, | abusePerfect :) So wonderfully written, and I loved the moment you used to write this from. I always thought the moment when he drugged Dexter and lowered him down was just beautiful, and I love how you said he was waiting for Dexter to wake up and admire him like he used to and how when he first recognized his brother he could feel "the blood in my veins begin to rush and my heart beat faster." Wonderful job! |
| Blood 2008-06-05 ch 1, anon. | abuseNot bad! I just wish it was longer. It seemed like it was going to go somewhere, but it didn't. Are you planning on continuing this? |
| STupIdWiNsAGaIn 2008-05-15 ch 1, | abuseWow, that is really good writing. Their relationship is so sad. I felt so bad for Dex when he had to kill Brian. It hurt me in the feel bad to see him sad. Um, anyway, great job. I loved it! :) |
| Black-Dranzer-1119 2008-05-13 ch 1, | abuseThis is awesome. For some reason I hate stories where Dexter falls in love with anyone cos of the whole no emotion thing but for some reason it doesn't bother me as much to read a story where Brian falls in love. Strange huh? anyway well done |
| Reena Lin 2008-05-07 ch 1, | abuseRudy was an interesting character. When he died, I felt sad for Dexter. He was the only one in the world understood what Dex thought and needed. Sigh... |
| CatherineWinner 2008-05-05 ch 1, | abusebeautiful~! Just wonderful! I'm so glad I wasn't the only one who saw that connection! thanks for the beautiful fic!!~ |
| aclassicistkitten 2008-05-05 ch 1, | abuseI don't know if this makes me twisted but I felt sorry for Brian at the end. So to read his thoughts before Dex woke up was cry worthy, I mean he's a little to obsessed but hey he hasn't been in Dex life for like forever. I think you got Brian down to a T. |
| DirtyVelvet 2008-05-04 ch 1, | abuseThis was fantastic! You captured Brian's thoughts and behaviour perfectly. Well done! ~DV~ |
| Aquatic Butterfly 2008-04-18 ch 1, | abuseThat creeped me out...just the way that Brian's twisted obsession for Dex on the show creeped me out, even after we knew that they were brothers. Good job in capturing it in a fic. |
| UNKNOWN 2008-04-16 ch 1, anon. | abuseI love it. Finally, a Brian fic. I really like how you portrayed his feelings and thougts during this scene. Nice work! |