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| Gotta Dance 88 2008-04-16 ch 1, | abuseIt's a good companion piece, especially since this time it's DG's point of view. Keep up your good work! |
| Hypergraph 2008-04-16 ch 1, | abuseI actually enjoyed this piece more than the original. I'm not exactly sure why; I think it's because the flow is easier. One 'right' leads to another in a more predictable manner (not predictable in a bad way!). Generally good, ascetic writing. |
| SpikesSweetie 2008-04-16 ch 1, | abuseAw, as equally adorable! Really enjoyed this companion! Bee |