 -oReTA aWaI tsUbAsa- 2009-06-25 . chapter 1wow...i actually think i'm going to like this pairing :3 |
 ayane04 2009-06-20 . chapter 1That made me cry. I honestly don't know why, but it did. I think it was the part when Haru said she loved him so much - it always makes me so happy when someone tells me they love me so that just made me go all... mushy :D
Awesome fic :D You should write more YamaHaru cause you're obviously so good at this :) |
 Sasural 2009-05-25 . chapter 1Aww I loved it!! My two favorite characters as a pairing! Lovely!! I really loved your story! |
 CP.Remix 2009-03-28 . chapter 1My Fave Pairing EVER! Great job!! |
 AriellaxCastral 2009-03-18 . chapter 1My first thought after finished reading it maybe "It's so sweet of them...". It's interesting to know what's in her mind about her new families and surroundings, especially her love's life in her POV. I think it's kinda hard to bear the burden as a mafia's wife, since there's so much responsibilities and limitations of what you can do or say or anything. For me, you write it really good. Anyway, it's nice and I love it. Keep up the writing, ok? :) |
 Arhazivory 2008-09-01 . chapter 1*sighs* So beautiful. |
 messington 2008-06-09 . chapter 1As much as I love these two for just being total airheads, it was nice to see what would really lie underneath their relationship if they were to have one. It was great to read from start to finish (and I'm a horrible skimmer if something's just so-so).
Plus, it's a nice change of pace from all the 8059. It's not bad, it just gets so excessive sometimes, ya know? |
 Idle Writer of Crack 2008-05-11 . chapter 1You hardly get to see Haru portrayed. Hn, wouldn't it be interesting if someone wrote a HaruHibari?
*wonders off*
PS: It was fantastic, by the way. |
 Persimmons 2008-04-26 . chapter 1 Gotta love YamaXHaru! Nice work! |
 Patka91 2008-04-22 . chapter 1I totally loved it! It's great to know that there are some great writers who can write something more than just yaoi :) |
 syntic 2008-04-21 . chapter 1You know, I've thought about the possibility of this couple being together, and just reading this makes me think its really believable. They're really cute together, and as a married couple its just too sweet. XD Great job! |
 nobody really. 2008-04-17 . chapter 1 *sobs* This was so beautiful! I almost cried when I read this! *sniffs* Great job! Please write more YamaHaru. ^^ |
 kasumi_ryumizu 2008-04-17 . chapter 1 I appreciate your fic for being Yamamoto x Haru. Most of the ones in fanfiction are yaoi (I don't support it) and it's really nice that somebody notices their 'similarities' of personality.
I actually like Yamamoto Takeshi a lot and he's my favorite in Hitman Reborn series (and manga) but Gokudera as his love interest sickens me. (Sorry, if you wrote something like that before)
Anyways, its so Haru centric and it was fun to read the Hahi in the end. I hope you write more YxH fics in the future. |
 urja shannan 2008-04-16 . chapter 1damn! i'm touched! continue please, u make such wonderful story. haru are lil bit OOC but i think it's normal, being a mature and all. and yamamoto, even he's in serious mode, argh i love it!
is it just me or, did yamaharu fic got popular lately huh? |
 xxkoffeexx 2008-04-16 . chapter 1Oh my goodness! Oh my--kyah! I can't begin to express my excitement and happiness (properly). Jeez. I loved this SO much. In fact, I read it, I laughed crazily, and now I'm back from dedicating a piano piece to you, Garowyn. (It's called "Blumenlied.") XD I sound crazy, don't I? Whew. Okay. Calm down.
This is so well-written it makes me almost embarassed about the fics I've produced. ^^; "Vow" had the very essence of being a part of the mafia--not that I know exactly, but eh. You have Haru and Yamamoto's characters down PAT. Like, all the way to the last paragraph. Yamamoto's laugh was pretty typical, but sweet, of him. I LOVE it. Haru's so Haru-like too.
And the story flowed so well! Emotions and story plot and the mafia world--everything's so deep. Sigh. I'm very happy. Thank you so much for writing this. And if you don't mind, I'll add it to "Spring Rain" C2. XD Again, you're amazing. |