Wow! I've just read all of your BSG stories and enjoyed each one! My only "complaint" is that they are too short! :) Thank you you for sharing!

Beautiful

Lovely job capturing the essence of Adama and Roslin's relationship. At first I thought it was a bizarre plot choice for the writers to have her staying in his quarters, but I'm enjoying the more intimate level of conversation that the staging provides. My favorite part here is the end of your story -- I can just visualize the shared glance first thing in the morning. Thanks!

Great story. Loved everything about it. It was sad but sweet:)

This was a truly beautiful piece of writing. There are several great turns of words, and I enjoyed it all thoroughly. Thanks for sharing!

When I read the summary, I thought "Oh god, that doesn't sound intriguing, it sounds creepy." But it had good grammar, so I clicked, and I'm really glad that I did.

You not only capture their relationship, you really get inside Adama's head, which I think is surprisingly hard to do. It's completely clear and in character, but it's a side of him we don't really see. I feel like I'm there, in their universe, which has never really happened for me.

In short, well done. I'm off to see if you have anything else.