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| hpfangurl12993 2008-07-25 ch 1, | abuseThat was PERFECT. |
| broodyleytons 2008-05-17 ch 1, | abusewhoa. loved it! it totally should of gone that way in the show...but then again the CW is a sorta family network and Mark isnt ever on the same page as us. lol. |
| ItalHunni28 2008-04-20 ch 1, | abuseah i love it...so perfectly done...and i am keeping the faith ;) |
| oth4evernaley 2008-04-20 ch 1, anon. | abuseOmg wow...That was totally amazing...So much loce and passion..AWESOME! Can't wait to read more from you!;) |
| RedRoom323 2008-04-17 ch 1, | abuseThat was really cute! I liked it! i like the way you wrote them, that was really good, keep up the great work with your writing! |
| NALEY HILL 2008-04-17 ch 1, | abuseHey you, I love your story. Good job. Pool sex... M... Ok never mind. It's so hott. Dude!... You're a good Author. I love your stories although. |
| Maaiik87 2008-04-17 ch 1, | abuseOMG! Totally loved it!! :D It was soo good! you should definitely write more hot Naley scenes! you're a prof! lol! loved this one-shot! great job! |
| BrucasNaley4ever 2008-04-17 ch 1, | abusethat was really sweet! |
| loverof naley 2008-04-16 ch 1, | abuseWow Kel, that was perfect. We kind of did get cheated on the whole intimate scene on Monday.I wasn't extremely shocked because this is what I expect from the show all the time. But this more than made up for it. It was so hot in very way. I would love to see Nathan and Haley do their homework on the show. To see them take the advice of the therapist and have a naked swim together would be love.They do deserve to have some fun and that would definitely help if you know what I mean. If we never get it at least we have this awesome piece to help. You did wonderful.:) |
| SluttyDeb 2008-04-16 ch 1, | abuseHot, hot, hot, Kelly. I like the way you write. Pamela |
| Beca 2008-04-16 ch 1, anon. | abusei was waiting for someone to write this scene! when i saw the ep. i was like, "wait till it's on fanfic" |
| krizue 2008-04-16 ch 1, | abuseaww i really liked it.. nice smut.. and it was sweet too |
| A Broken Trist 2008-04-16 ch 1, | abuseAbsolutely love it! Really fills in what they didn't show us. :] Great work. Keep it up! :] |
| naley19 2008-04-16 ch 1, | abuseOH MY GOD! I AM SO GLAD THAT YOU WROTE THIS. THIS WAS AN AWESOME ONE SHOT. I LOVED IT AND I WISHED IT HAPPENED FOR REAL LIKE THIS ON THE SHOW. KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK! |
| ravens23fan 2008-04-16 ch 1, | abuseI was really really hopeing someone would do a story like this it was perfect and i love it. |