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Voldie on Varsity Track
2008-04-21
ch 1,
abuseI don't know the fandom you're writing for, but I figured I'd come check out some of your work anyways! And do finish reading LotR and the Silmarillion; your writing, from what I've read so far, is great, and we certainly need more Farawyn fics that don't completely suck.

That said, good writing, and the last bit of this has me wondering about the evil fate in store for these people... perhaps I'd know more if I knew the fandom, but 'tis most excellent so far. :)

-Christie
Cassidy-x
2008-04-21
ch 1,
abuseGreat plot - i'd never thought of Nathaniel's life before he was adopted!
Will you update?
Can't wait to read more!!
Cassidy
Stardawn
2008-04-20
ch 1,
abuseooh, interesting! that quote, though- i had always assumed his family didn't care mych about him, but now i see that that may not be true. keep it up!
While the Blood Flows
2008-04-18
ch 1,
abuseWow, excellent writing style.
the epitome of randomness
2008-04-18
ch 1,
abuseI love the way that was written, this is a great idea!!
cherrybloo
2008-04-17
ch 1,
abuseinteresting idea! verry awesome... update soon :)
Mintaka the Comedienne
2008-04-16
ch 1,
abuseI really love the writing style. The vocabulary is mature and nicely varied. I don't normally go for angst, but this is written tastefully. Of course, I might be a tad bit biased, seeing as I'm the story's beta. *(shifty eyes)* I'm intruiged as to what happens next.
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