I'm having a bit of trouble reading your story. I like the idea of the crossover, espeically FFxGS, because it has so much interesting potential, but unfortunately the events move so fast that I find myself speed reading for all the facts since the majority of the story is just that: facts and events with little details. A story doesn't feel right if events move too fast in the beginning. Instead of being smoothly integrated into the story, we're thrown rather violently in.

Consider people's physical features and apperances, they way they stand, the way they talk, etc. Try to describe your characters a bit more. Just because we may know what they look like from the games, that doesn't mean you shouldn't describe what they look like.

All that being said, it's a good start. Keep on writing!

Isaac is so protective! Alex will never get Mia, unless he kills Isaac alone. But Isaac will win over the "Seymour" copy and win Mia's heart... wait... I just hope that Isaac don't 'die' in this ._. You will know what I mean by that when you beat FFX, if you didn't already.

Great chapter! I thought the whole 'Big Brother' thing between Kay and Isaac was cute!! And once again...yay to Mudshipping!! Isaac's 'sneaky kiss' was just perfect in this chapter, and Ivan is still not talking...Hmm, from the way you described Kimarhi (Ivan), his personality and Ivan's are pretty different since Kimarhi is the silent, scornful type; yet Ivan is the strategic, friendly kind...Are you trying to make their personalities different since Kimarhi is from FFX and Ivan's from GS? Just curious...And in FFX, did the Besaid Aurochs really have a losing streak? I felt sorry for Garet and his team...

Anyways, please update soon!!:)

Ivan sure is pretty quiet in this chapter. It's great how Mia's always there to comfort Isaac, especially when he starts to feel like an outsider thanks to the treatment he receives from others...And I'm assuming the mudshipping starts in this chapter, huh? I loved the way Isaac proved Garet wrong when he defeated a fiend by himself!! Go Isaac!! You show that Garet who's boss!!

-Saturos and Menardi are Mia's rival summoner and guardian? That's very interesting...Maybe you should start adding in the baddies in future chapters. Just a small suggestion: maybe Agatio and Karst could be Isaac and co's next enemies in the next chapter?

Great chapter and I hope you update once again really soon!!:)

Another fast update...I'm impressed!! Isaac's starting to show his feelings for Mia!! Mudshipping rocks!! Just a little sidenote when you write up the next chapter; try to separate your sentences and paragraphs more so the text doesn't look so bunched up.

Ivan with a lance!? That's pretty awesome...I wish Golden Sun had lances in place of rods and staffs. Mia, Sheba, Ivan, and Jenna would look cool wielding a lance!! Think about it. And is there really a Kalt Island in FFX? Sounds a lot like the Kalt Island in Golden Sun: The Lost Age...Oh, I wanted to ask you something related to FFX...Have you played Final Fantasy VII and/or FFVII Crisis Core?

Anyways, I hope you update really soon!

Wow, I didn't expect that fast of an update!! This fic is as awesome as ever and I want you to update asap!!

By the way, thanks for giving me a character list...I really appreciate it...since I'm not very familiar with FFX, but I've seen my friend play the game so I sort of know the characters. I could tell that Garet was going to be Wakka already, and Isaac was somehow going to be the main character since it is a mudshipping fic...yay!!^^

Great beginning, and it's going to be an Isaac/Mia fic!! Yay! I've never played FF10, so I'm not familiar with its plot, but the story's great, regardless of that. Please update really soon!