Please let them hook up in the next chapter! They are so cute together! I am not really a fan of team edward, more team jasper, but i an really enjoying this story surprisingly!

Just read this for the umpteenth time (Seriously, umpteenth!) I love your characterization of Edward! Like, squealing like a little girl, giggling hysterically, hunting down guy like that to marry love. Updates to keep the rabid readers sane? Please? Please?! Been checking 3 times a day for updates on any of your fantastic stories! :D

OMG! The donut rejects! That freaking put me in a giggle fit! You no what be funny? Seeing a REALLY fat guy in a bikini having a giggle fit. Just picture that! Distubing, yet funny. Even FUNNIER, Emmett in a bikini having a laughing fit! Omg, lolololololololol Rotflwwthrcvv
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ah! im lovin this story so much! plz update this soon! i check evveryday for updates lol(i kno ima bit obsessive wit the computer)thank you so much!! if ur hispanic muchas grasias!

So, I think I've read this at least 5 times in two weeks, it's so addictive! The characterization of Edward is the best ever.
Ever think about writing a companion piece in Edwards POV? :D

Okay, so i have literally spent my past 3 days reading every one of your stories (minus the ones i havent had time to read yet) and so far ALL of them are amazing :)

I really like this story in particular, just a quick thought... when will you next update (im not like pestering i swear... well maybe i am a little, but this is by no fault of my own, i really like the story)

Hi ,I'm a huge fan of ur work!I've read accoss the ocean and now this story , great work bye

Such a good story! I'm addicted!

I don't think there are adjectives enough to described how great this story is! Definitely my favorite of pretty much ever. Updates please? Cookies for more fantastic chapters :D

Just started reading today. Thank goodness for days off of work! And I love it! Now, I want an update.

aw edward so loving to bella and she should so tell edward how she feels her i was just think that before u wrote that she might in the ch and great story cant wait for the next one ur a great writer

No, I just mean... I could have gotten Emmett sick instead of you.” I was confused.

“So? What difference does that make?”

“Well, I wouldn’t want to be in this position with Emmett, hahah and aww bella doing that for edward when are they gonna get together it'd really bugging me

hate stanely and why does jessica do that and aw bella u so need to get together with edward

aw the kiss and hahah bella spied on her mom

hahah edward:)