okayy but when are you going to update your third story in this series 'all the time in the world'

OK this is a really good fic. You should Do a follow up, I'm really curious who the 4 people are. You did really good on this one.

Absolutely loved the story and would love to read the sequel. Plan to reread the whole story.

YAY! Balloon joke! Where DOES she get the balloons from?

*GASP* OMG! I ALWAYS knew she was an evil *insert derogatory term for a female dog here* and her family are all sociopaths! I never liked her anyway!

arrh its killin me i cant figure it out who are the four that watch them from a distance

love the reference to micheal weatherly!!

Awesome, Sad, Happy. I do not know how to put everything I love about this fanfic into one thing. I am going to read the other sequal, and then the other. Sorry it took so long for me to find this!

ok i have to write before it gets to... plotty. lol.

If you were online you coulld help me choose between AKaaP and When I Fall, but i cant think prooper like and i dunno what im gonna write... *fail*

i tried to get my friend to read this but then i started to... I'M SUPOSSED TO BE WRITING! neh.

i never knew Eric Dane was in Charmed,, though when i first read this i didnt know who Eric Dane was, but after watching a million Ellen interviews with grey's charries last night, i know do. lol

Man my reviews are epicly awesome and random...

I new the kid who raped bonnie had something to do with jeanne! i guessed it on the chapter before this but i thought he was jeanne's son.. close enough i guess!! great story though!

xoxo

great story

1. Ziva's fathers name is eli
2. Did you get the names off of Disney
Ps hi i havent written anything yet but i like your story so far!

Hey, i decided i will read this and the next one cause im bored, even though i REALLY have to do homework... oh well.

I loved it.
tomorrow I'm reading the sequel.