No one else thought it was weird that Roxas didn't know where he was from? Hayner's kinda funny jealous. But I must've acted the same way...(lost in thought)

uh...

romance is usually mutual.

not the whole, "WHY DID YOU SMILE AT HIM? WHO IS HE? ARE YOU CHEATING ON ME!
Aside from that it was fine. A sequel would compliment it well.