while i'm glad that the story was not left unfinished, it is somewhat disappointing that it ended so abruptly. i know, it takes a lot of effort to think of story lines, but i can't help but feel cheated, as if setsuna's maturing and the development of her relationship with naoko just happened overnight with us (the readers) missing out on the fun. and i'm not talking about the lack of bedroom scenes (those scenes can be irrelevant when not written well enough). your story is currently like a sandwich with just the bread and maybe a little mayo and lettuce. it's nice, but not the best it can be. it could have easily accommodated about two more chapters.

nonetheless, you've entertained me during the duration of the time it took for me to read your fic, and the idea was certainly unusual, so thank you :) your English is certainly perfectly fine (it wasn't painful to read)

I wonder what's Konoka going to do if she finds out...
That Setsuna and Naoko almost had SEX SEX SEX!

Or an affair with Naoko?

lol, I think this story is due for a rating change. But it's interesting. Keep it going. :)

WHY?
WHY DID YOU LEAVE KONOKA?
NO! T^T
Oh! And I like your story!

please continue your story

Naoko finally has her own warrior.

Please continue the story

Update please.

these types of stories are the best when completed because then all the answers are revealed. therefore,please finish it! :D although i'm all for konoxsetsu and i don't really like negi being konoka's choice, i really enjoyed reading all those twists in relationships between the girls. yue and nodoka! hahaha that was hilarious

Hm... I like this, and yet it falls short in some areas.

There were a lot of places that could use more introduction, more description, and better scene switches, such as the introduction of Naoko and Negi and Konoka reading letters.

I like the idea of Setsuna falling for a look-alike, but now the question turns to the look-alike... who is she, can Setsuna trust her? Can anyone else trust her? I see you actually ARE answering things about that throughout these chapters, and that's good. Her motives and why she has feelings for Setsuna despite being twice her age is the real draw here.

...speaking of which, I'm not sure if I'm catching any conflict here other than Setsuna's usual shyness. I keep thinking that there has to be more than that, but maybe it could be just me, who likes heavier plot.

I do wonder how she heard about her niece's feelings, and how she stayed out of the limelight until now.

Beefing up the descriptions (and fixing some of those spelling mistakes) will improve this piece! So I will be sticking around.

Wow, great story.
As i'm a big konosetsu fan, this is still a great pairing. Its a bit sad that Setsuna isn't with Konoka but thats what happens i guess.
Setsuna does need some loving and Naoko is there, well done with that too.
I look forward to your next chapter.

WOW!

That first bit caught me completely off guard!

wow. this story is realy interesting!
i'm more into konosetsu, but this is good in its own way. ^_^
i hope you update soon!
i wanna know if konoka will find out about setsunxnaoko and stuff!

DUN DUN DUN *insert dramatic reverb*

does asuna end up with collet? please... im dying to know