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| SmirkyLycanthrope 2008-06-24 ch 1, | abuseOh, a very interesting start ^^ I like this crossover very much =) Also I like how it's nice and succinct - so many people feel like they have to go on and on and on about a tiny little thing and it's really annoying sometimes. You may want to fix some of the grammar mistakes and make it a bit easier to read, but whatever - I can read past that ^^ I REALLY like it - please continue! =D ~SmirkyLycanthrope |