This is a completely different story very dark, but it feels right.

Kind of creepy, but very complex and interesting!

Wow, this has been a very interesting story... so interesting that I didn't manage to review the first two chapters but just kept reading.

Sorry! You deserve the reviews!

Well, I've got to get back to reading this fascinating story...

Oh, I can totally see L acting like this. A really difficult child, but in a very L-like way I was uneasy about the premise of this story, but you really pulled it off!

Cute! Nice L, too; I could definitely imagine this scenario.

Wonderful, amazing, awesome. This is probably the BEST story I have ever read on fanfiction. Death Note is my all time favorite series of manga and anime, so I am generally wary about reading Death Note fanfiction, but yours is just so...I don't even know. It blows my mind. I loved the first chapter, it made me laugh. I loved both the 50 sentence challenges...certain sentences sent me barging into my sister's room to share with her...the darkness of Liar Liar made me crazy! I would have screamed (in a good way...in a frustrated way...) if the rest of my family had not been asleep. There were more things I liked, but I can't remember them. Just simply AMAZING. I can't think...I had a whole review planned out for each chapter, but I can't remember. I wonder when you'll update again. Please update again soon!

I love that L put Near and Mello above all else, I really do, but to have gone that far and for it to end like that...it's so horrible. Not that the original canon was any better...

I didn't really believe that L ever really gave in. I just can't see him doing that; he would never give in to Kira. But I thought he would be the one to die still, not Light. That he had to do the murder himself really shocked me. It's so tragic, for them both.

And of course, I'm glad that Watari got to live too. I notice that Watari and L aren't that close in your ficlets; that's sort of sad to me, since I see them as closer.

Wow, that was so abstract. I don't see much Near and L interaction, but this was great. Very interesting for a first meeting.

Very cute, very funny. The interactions between L and Light have a nice balance between them of friends, not quite friends, coworkers, etc.

Chapter 2: Oh yes! He totally would, L that little smart ass... :P I can only imagine him as a child [shudders
Chapter 3: Love the AU, and everyone os perfectly in character! Or course a little yaoi never hurt anyone :P ...Dear Lordy Lou, that chess game sounds frickin' impossible... yet strangely fun! You're serious that you made it up? That's intense! L's secrets are so sweet! I love it in fics when they just reveal little things about the characters like that, it makes them seem more human

Chapter 5: Brilliant idea! I'm taking this as canon _ Little Near is so irresistibly cute!

Chapter 8: If I have a child like L, I'd kill myself, end of story. Strangely enough, I can't see him behaving anything other than that though :D

Chapter 9: In-freaking-credible for one... also staggeringly sad... Because honestly... I think L would do it. Safe to stay this little piece depressed me for a few days...

Chapter 11: Oh jeeze... that took a hunk out of my heart... Seeing/reading L like that.. and Light... Dearie, you know how to pull the heart strings D
Chapter 12: Fudgestick. I feel horribly pathetic... but I cried...(not that you're a bad writer! I just... don't think I've ever cried from Fanfiction before :P Terribly, terribly depressing... Which also means it's good!

All in all, you're an incredibly capable writer, and I'm looking forward to something new from you

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Love it. This one was a tad bit on the morbid side, but I like it. Keep going! Love your work!

OMG... I wuved it. It was full of angsty awesomeness!

Particularly the dream sequences. Most people suck at writing good dream sequences...

I love the way this came out. I love to see the Wammy kids (Mello and Near COLLABORATING on something, but L is more important to them than their rivalry), and L... L coming out of it, at last. _

This is !

This line really stood out to me, for some reason. 17: Ice: Matt had died because of his loyalty to his lover, he knew; Mello because his grief had made him careless; L because fascination had stayed his hand; never me, Near swore silently, left behind and lonely, never me.

Well, every line in every chapter was touching. But that one seemed to jump out at me. You're a fantastic writer. Thanks for sharing :D

I have fallen utterly in love with this fic.

You are an absolutely amazing writer all of the characters (especially L) are amazingly in character, and whatever genre you choose to write be it humor, tragedy, romance or just randomness, you excel in.
I especially like your 50 sentence challenges, although everything in this fic rocks you've actually inspired me to start writing DN fanfiction P

Just... well done. Really. I sincerely hope you continue with this.