I know I said I didn't like Luka...only because Carter and Abby should've stayed together...but I LOVED your interpretation of that episode! I can't believe that one was already just 2 years ago. Sheesh!! LOL Man does time fly...



Well, here's my pen name...now you can add me or whatever...LoL :o)


But yes!! I did love your version of that episode!!





Great work!


Luv,
mandi *_*

i really liked this one. loved how you captured the blind panic that hits when we think a loved one is hurt and we just need to be by their side no matter what happens. great writing. the last sections about her just knowing that she fits and her body just carrying her where she belongs. loved it!

still loving it, but i'm feeling like a one trick pony with these reviews cause i don't have anything new to add. loved the bit between abby and frank though. you can just sense her frustration of being given the runaround with the cops and now frank. though of course frank isn't purposely being unhelpful, but in her state of mind she couldn't possibly know that and gets more frustrated. all of this was done very well.

great chapter. i love how you can not just hear the panic in abby's words, but you can also feel the panic in her thought processes. how she's willing to do anything for her family.great great job.

i know i don't know the episode this is from,but i love this opening chapter. the dialog flows very well and it's cool to see the thought processes going through abby's head as she encounters the various things that are going on. well done.

i absolutely loved the story
it was great, oh and loved the ending

Pretty much perfect - well worth the wait.

Loved it!
Is it just a one shot? Cause I don't want it to be :P

i love it!