This Chapter I found quite usefule to know how exactly she lost her mother, but there is still the present to think about
and you left me and friends hangin man!
This Story is awesome, and I would hate to see it Join all the good stories that have een forsaken by their Authors.

But think of this as a rus!h greats stories need way more chapters and details than most other stories.

Write Strong and Keep up the Good Work DUDE!

I hope you'll find the inspiration to continue this someday. In the meantime, don't delete it, please. Who knows, inspiration may come sooner then you think.

I just looking and saw your story. Awesome, I like Nao and like the your bring out her character. Can't wait for the next chapter

Hold onto my hat and watch, huh? Easy for you to say, you know what happens! Anyway...oh crap, don't tell me Natsuki's tied to this weird demon thing too. Heck knows what these guys want with both Nao and Natsuki. How's Natsuki tied to it though, hm...

that's certainly interesting...

..that cant be good...

Okay, I have now decided that my theory is correct that Nao's father is a demon. With the stone and all that appeared in Natsuki's closet I can't say otherwise till I'm proven wrong. Seems Nao's mom knew about it too. Whatever the heck is going on.

Okay, what the heck is going on here?! What was that skull thing that attacked Nao?! I mean, when I first started reading it, I thought it was going to be the usual "Post Carnival" fic where the characters healed over their pain and stuff, but now this? And what's the deal with Nao's dad? Is...Nao's dad a demon? Sorry for the "twenty questions" bit, but I'm really curious.

Awesome Ch.8! I really like the dynamic with Nao and Natsuki ... can't wait for the next chapter ..hopefully we can get 3 more chapters...puleeze!!

I like this story, I hope you post the next chapter soon!

Great chapter, that creature seems strange though and I wonder who this Kenji guy is.
I do need to point out a few spelling mistakes though.
grmb=grab
shape=sharp
Anyways, I hope you continue writing. Can't wait for the next chapter.

Umm I dont know what to say...a huge WTF?

Umm, kinda steering away from what I thought this fic was gonna be, but hey your the writer and I'm still gonna read this :P

A great chapter! More Natsuki x Nao!

yeowzahs...aww a sweet moment between natsuki and nao

..just who is that fellow..? and things doesnt look good for Chie and Aoi..