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| VessaMorana 2008-10-05 ch 6, anon. | abuseYay chapter! I love fics where Harry has a snake. And Remus better tell Harry what's going on soon otherwise there will be big problems I'm sure. Also, it would be a terrarium which is for any land dwelling creature or a paludarium which is basically a combined terrarium adn aquarium. Aquarium is water - like fish. If you wanted to be really specific it would be a herpetarium which is specifically for reptiles and/or amphibians. I can't wait to see what happens with the babies. Hilary will freak. |
| The Potter Monitor 2008-10-01 ch 6,  | abuseWe haven't checked up on this story in a while, but the new stuff is great. Keep it up. |
| Elfwyn 2008-09-30 ch 6, | abuseHm, if his primary caregivers use big words consistently Harry would most likely use them too, especially if he really only interacts with them (no other children) on a day to day basis. He would be worse than Hermione in one sense in that she seemed lonely as in her parents were very busy and she read where as Harry is surrounded by extremely intelligent people so he not only read but works with them. |
| calileane 2008-09-30 ch 6, | abuseyou made a wonderful crossover. This story is cool. Lara and Harry little family is way better than what Harry normally went trought in the book. |
| pfeil 2008-09-27 ch 6, | abuseYes, his birthday's not essential, I agree. And I'm definitely looking forward to Harmony -- and her reaction to Harry should be great =) |
| bjon66 2008-09-27 ch 1, | abuseLooks like a pretty good story so far.. I assume your crossover is from the movies.. Never saw them, just played the games.. One thing though, shouldn't Harry and Neville be walking? They should have been walking by the time they were one... TTFN |
| pfeil 2008-09-27 ch 3, | abuseSeems you like extra ells in Lily, too: "Lara was like Lilly at her most stubborn" |
| FrequencyQueen 2008-09-26 ch 6, | abuseHarry's a real kick in your story. The obastacle course running sounded like a lot of fun, if not painful. I'm visualizing something like the bit in the movie where Lara is fighting the robot? Are you going to have Harry keep up with that training when he's older? |
| Dumbledore 2008-09-26 ch 6, | abuseGreat!! Loving it!! Can't wait to read more |
| Lincos Trix 2008-09-26 ch 1, | abuse“And as much as I would love to be a full time mom" It's mum, MUM. They're English... And no matter how much you think you (Americans) are speaking English, you aren't! Stop being lazy and at least try to believe the world doesn't revolve around America. |
| Cor Strike FX 2008-09-26 ch 6, | abuseHeehee, nice. 'You can't take it back!' But you know...I don't think Lara realizes the usefulness of poisonous snakes as allies... |
| Fire From Above 2008-09-26 ch 6, | abuseI hope Remus and Sirius come around soon. And I enjoyed the library scene. |
| Fire From Above 2008-09-26 ch 5, | abuseNice and to the point. |
| Fire From Above 2008-09-26 ch 4, | abuseThat all sounded like a lot of fun. Hooray for Sirius. |
| Fire From Above 2008-09-26 ch 3, | abuseGood chapter. |