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| Phoenix4life 2008-06-15 ch 10,  | abuseIt was a great story and I really enjoyed reading it. |
| Loser-in-training 2008-06-09 ch 2, | abuseI really like this story and the plot! but there are lots of run-ons and some punctuation errors. other than that it's awesome! |
| 101spacemonkey 2008-05-23 ch 10, | abuseive enjoyed this, but it does seem a little short, and i can also see huge possibilities for this storyline, perhaps along the lines of the miniture killer but on a smaller scale and aimed soley at greg... ( i hope you know what im trying to say, well type in this case, as im worried it makes sense to me, and me alone) i loved that she just had a bottle of nitrous oxide with her, i know it was for her experiment, but walking around with it, ingenius! ;) (quite funny actually, i loved how it had more than one purpose, not only could be a club, but also a drug!) i thought she was so organised, but it turns out it was random-ish... lucky for some, if greg could just fall into my hands like he fell into hers (but i would get away with it!) |
| 101spacemonkey 2008-05-23 ch 9, | abusei love how greg was still making light of the situation. i would have liked more whump personaly, but i still think having your own greg stashed away somewhere sounds fun, and that this woman was onto something! |
| 101spacemonkey 2008-05-23 ch 8, | abusei love the word stashed! wouldnt we all want a greg of our own stashed away somewhere, i'm a little annoyed that warrick didnt rush in there and check to see if greg was there, but i guess having the team altogether is much more fun! |
| 101spacemonkey 2008-05-23 ch 7, | abusethanks for the PM, i dont know how i missed the other chapters, the site hasnt been loading very well for me recently, so that might be it, have you been having a similar issue? anyway. i want a shrine! this chapter seems a little rushed (only a smidge) anyway, when she said she was off to get her pills, it seemed a little like an easy explanation as to her behaviour (i dont need pills to obsess, or not obsess about my greg) |
| 101spacemonkey 2008-05-23 ch 6, | abuseeek, they seem to be onto something! i cant wait for an update! more greg please! |
| 101spacemonkey 2008-05-23 ch 5, | abusethe person who has greg must be really smart, they have either set up michael or michael is involved... off to read more, thanks for the PM (indiana was good, but well, it wasnt waht i was expecting...) |
| 101spacemonkey 2008-05-23 ch 4, | abuseyay greg! poor baby! can you PM to remind me of this fic, im heading out now (inidana awaits) thanks! |
| 101spacemonkey 2008-05-23 ch 3, | abusewas that a mixed bathrrom, or was it a male bathroom sara wandered into? hehe anyway, whoever is behind this, they are good! has the team thouht that maybe greg was drugged due to the very little blood loss? |
| 101spacemonkey 2008-05-23 ch 2, | abuseit just keeps getting more intriging, it does feel like you rushed each chapter, and i want to see greg, whereever he is! but absence makes the heart grow fonder! off to read the next little chapter! oh wait a second, thought i should say, i liek your use of technical things such as luminol |
| 101spacemonkey 2008-05-23 ch 1, | abusesometimes the characters seem IC ad other times they seem OOC, still i like thsi fic. seeing as the title is obssessed im wondering if there is someone with a grudge against one of the team and plans to get at them through greg, or is it more of a case of someone obseessed with Greg (me!) and is satlking him (probably me as well) i supose i will see when i click the button that leads to the next chapter |
| leetvfan 2008-05-07 ch 6, | abuseIt's cool, please, update |
| GregRox 2008-04-22 ch 10, | abuseAWESOME Pieface! |
| luf100 2008-04-21 ch 10, | abuseI loved it Sarry! Crazy old lady though... xD It was awesome, and it was my first Vegas fic! : ) |