Great fic! I know that you said taht you prefer constructive criticism but I can't really think of any thing to criticize that you would change. Unless you'd be willing to turn Naruto into a psychopathic serial killer that is...

Anyways good job! Update soon!

i like you and i very much like your attitude in your writing. i suppose that you have already heard that you writing is well done but i must say that you plot twists are intriguing and certainly keep your readers entranced.

I actually like that he lost a finger. It's not a cliche and I appreciate that.

This is going in the favs

wow that was amazing you know i hate stories where they make naruto UBER F@CKING POWERFUL and bsh the hell out of sasuke and sakura i like saura as long as she isn't being a complete b@tch to naruto and completely obliviouse to the fact sasuke doesn't give a shyt about her but i likethe stories where the put naruto to the test with extreme training and learning and yet it actually take time for him to get strong i also like stories where they don't completely rely on one character making all the others seem completely unimportant having said that i believe that above all the other stories that i have read (which is quite a few) and to how many reviews i have made (which is none so you might think this an honor which it really isn't im just as lazy as shikamaru thinking review troublesome but your rant kicked me into action and agree with you 157% yes thats right 157) i say all the ppl who say you should make naruto uber powerful or hae superpowers can go get buttfucked (excuse my high-class german) and do as you damn well pleasecuz i love this fanfic as it is and if it changes well i hope for the better but i doubt it could get better then this and thats my minirant for ll those retards out here and your awesome fanfic i hope tis was well recieved this canadian is out eh

BRAVO, BRAVO!
Finally, a point I can use against the cannon nitpickers.
Thank you very much for the work you have put into this story.
I hope to see alot more in the future.
(No pressure though.)
Happy Writing.

I actually like the ring finger-less Naruto plot device. Very unique and will definitely help me to remember this fanfic.

So far I like this story, but the idea of Naruto watching himself die who knows how many times a day is a bit...depressing. But it puts a certain spin in your story, so I certainly won't tell you to change it.

I find it hilarious whenever Naruto says the exact same thing at the exact same time that Jiraiya or Kakashi would. It makes me laugh every time.

I like this story. Definitely a favourite.

Heehee, finally! Someone who had Jiraiya and Tsunade do the deed! Nice reasons for not letting Jiraiya be Hokage.

Though I have to wonder about Naruto's reaction to Sasuke. Seems a bit too canon, ya know? Your Naruto doesn't seem like the kind of person who'd make the same goal of dragging Sasuke back so he won't be executed. But I like how you're writing your fic, anyhow.

Update soon!

Damn, you continue to impress me. It's getting really, really original. And you're certainly not afraid to make Naruto less than perfect (the missing finger, the limits of the future telling). Very nice. I am curious, however, about the Kyuubi. Shouldn't Naruto meet it sometime or later?

I am very, very impressed. Bravo. This has got to be the most impressive rendition of the scene between Zabuza and team 7 meeting. Over and over I read the same thing in every fic, but wow, this absolutely blew me away. The attention to detail like the vacuum of wind left behind from the sword, the feeling of the killing intent, and the description of Zabuza. Brillaint, I felt like this was the first time I've ever read this scene.

how would having a severed finger prevent you from grabing milk from within the confines of a fridge?

refrigerators have the handles on the left side therefor he would logically grab it with his right hand to open and then reach in with his left hand which still has full use of its milk grabbing untensile.

if he is missing his milk grabber from his right hand then he would be swinging it across his body with his left arm reaching in with his right arm grabbing/groping the milk then he would reach over with his left arm to grab the door or closing it with his shoulder or milk filled hand because his hand is filled

thus this story is illogical. i am considering not continuing yonder.

lol you lost a sheet of paper on a black bed.

thats funny dude.

ohnoes. he lost his finger.

how is he going to go all Double Chopstick Strike! on his ramen?! did you consider that?!

he will have to find a second favorite food now that he can only eat half as much! (not pocky)

w/e fingerloss is fine just dont make him go all emo over sasuke leaving.

and is this a naruhina fic?

cuz i honestly think that that is the least likely pairing to happen.

logically.

because really. naruto is to dense to notice hinata and hinata is to shy to talk to him and they arnt really even friends in the first place. and do you really think they would be a good couple anyway? naruto would act like naruto and hinata would be shy and pretty much become some submissive quiet blushing girl with no personality who faints to much.

keep writing.

and though fingers and maybe an eye or ear are alright just dont make him lose any limbs feet or hands. or thumbs.

or other appendages...

like a penis

*Amused*

You really did capture Naruto and Jiraiya's interactions with Tsunade perfectly.

It's also disturbing you are able to know what Jiraiya would do. *Suspicious glare*

Keep up the excellent writing. Longer chapters WOULD be nice, but fine as is.

Regards
SA

Excellent story, I'm not a fan of the main character losing a digit, but I do acknowledge that it is your story and as such whatever rhetorical devices you use are up to you. I only have one piece of constructive criticism: there are some portions that are rather confusing and the story might benefit if they were clarified. Or maybe that was the effect you were going for, I don't know. Anyway, nice job.