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| Fantasy Fan Girl 2008-05-15 ch 1,  | abuseThat was really good. The analogy thing was very well placed and the story was excellent in that it wasn't too over the top but not underdone either. A great job done. Keep writing. FFG- Jo |
| Devatron2000 2008-04-27 ch 1, | abusevery very cute |
| Turtle-chan 2008-04-27 ch 1, anon. | abuseeks! that was cute! |
| rhodablanche 2008-04-25 ch 1, anon. | abusegreat fic! simple and romantic... i love it :) |
| Silver Blue Starshine 2008-04-25 ch 1, | abuseLoved it. This was great! ♥ |
| silver sniper of night 2008-04-22 ch 1, | abuseaw that was so sweet! i love it! |
| Louanna 2008-04-21 ch 1, anon. | abuseThat was so cute! Clever little bit of writing there :) I loved Roy's cryptic analogy, it seemed very much like something Roy would actually say, lol. x |
| 1st Lieutenant Riza Hawkeye 2008-04-19 ch 1, | abuseVery sexy, I loved it! Keep up the great work! |
| Red's 21st 2008-04-19 ch 1, | abuseLove the analogy! Very sweet and nicely written. |
| MoonStarDutchess 2008-04-18 ch 1, | abuseThis is a wonderful piece. I love how you made the moves they made in chess reflect the moves in real life. Wonderful job! |
| jacksparrow589 2008-04-18 ch 1, | abuseAh, the lovely chess analogy. Some of those moments in the manga are some of my favorites. I honestly find it hard to believe that Riza wouldn't know (or at least have some idea) what Roy was talking about, so I'll assume that she knew but was too embarassed or preoccupied to really get the message. Probably the latter, though. Or she could've just been playing dumb to fish the truth out of him, now then, couldn't she? (Goodness knows I do that a lot.) Anyway, I was looking for something good to read, and I found it here. It's a really nice "slice of life" piece. You didn't need a fight or an injury to make it good. It was just another moment (and a seemingly insignificant one, at that) in the lives of one of my favorite couples, and you made it into something that was wonderful to read. Way to go! I love it! |
| fAteD lOvE 2008-04-18 ch 1, | abuseAw cute. So cleverly written. |
| winglessfairy25 2008-04-17 ch 1, | abuseThat was cute and sweet. A very well-written piece. I love the analogy. Wonderful work! Erinn~ |
| Anne Packrat 2008-04-17 ch 1, | abuseCute! Good use of the chess analogy. |