Its good so far except, I have a question how did Diego know the year, but this is fiction so I guess it doesn't matter also, it
Manny, Diego, Ellie, and Eddie but the Eddie one works both ways.

Where's Ellie? Nice so far but check your spelling and re read it over again just in case.

Cool fic so far. Janet seems lke such a (insert cuss word here). I felt sorry for Tillie when she got punched! It was really cool though, for a first chapter. Please updat again soon!