Ok, here it goes. It's a really good concept. However, it tended to confuse me a little because I wasn't quite sure what was going on part of the time. Maybe a little more description of what's going on outside of Clarissa's head.

Wow...excellently original idea. A little vague, maybe - I wasn't sure what was going on at first. But I liked seeing things from Clarissa's point of view - it creates a little sympathy for her. And I loved the Ian/Clarissa banter, so funny. Wish there was more!