Yet again wonderful story!

This was a great story of aliens, it shows them not being too mindless monsters but haveing a family and loving one another, very great story..

I don't know if anyone has told you before but predator is not the name of their kind they are called Yaut'ja, but other than that its really good.

seems like a perfect ending... (is it??!) Definitely movie material... Oscar!

one- I thought the spear hit her stomach... two-awesome chapter! you wrapped the story up nicely!

one-WOW! two - you might want to re-look at this chapter. there are wrong places of new paragraphs and some missing words. also, when you post something, you might want to go back arid reread it On here -there are some wierd little boxes in the middle of sentences...

way better chapter! this was awesome! TJ Rules! LoL

good thing MiKe knows...

quick chapter. I think it's a little weird that the "Lesser" knew what a state was...

cool chapter. Mike seems boring compared to Ali though ...

hmm... interesting chapter... I wonder if they will have problems with that alien later - the one that bit Ali. . .

interesting way to pull the characters together and exchange information. nice cliffhanger.

please don't tell me she's going to fall for him and she's going to like, sacrifice herself or something for him and then it ends... this better not end like that...

nice chapter. you are bringing the best of Ali back out again.(check the first paragraph, there are boxes in the sentence)

so this woman tries to help Ali out, and then Ali just kills her...