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Reviews For: Warehouse Woes

Janine Grant
2008-05-15
ch 1,
abuseI thought that 1st chapter was awesome! Plz add more
IndyAgent
2008-04-17
ch 1,
abuseYay! Another GS story! Nice start. I will be looking forward to more. I also need to be working on my ideas. (lol)

Just one little note, if you don't mind, 99 (aka Barbara) has blue eyes, not brown. Max/Don has the brown eyes.

Please continue.. I'm curious to see what kind of dangers Max/99 will be getting into.
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