Really good! I'm glad you decided to post some more chapters! I really liked the balance between the relationship of Max and 99 and the case itself. Keep the chapters coming!

Great story. I can't wait to see what happens next. Really enjoying it.
Edith (99)

I loved the fanfiction. Great story. I can't wait to read more. Let me know when you get more out.
Edith

I thought that 1st chapter was awesome! Plz add more

Yay! Another GS story! Nice start. I will be looking forward to more. I also need to be working on my ideas. (lol)

Just one little note, if you don't mind, 99 (aka Barbara) has blue eyes, not brown. Max/Don has the brown eyes.

Please continue.. I'm curious to see what kind of dangers Max/99 will be getting into.