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Forced Smile
2009-11-18 . chapter 1
... F. I JUST SPENT AN HOUR RELOCATING THIS.

If I can spend an hour looking, I'm willing to spend a few minutes to tell you absolutely how amazing this is, how much I love it, and how godly you are.

And now my homework's not done.

But this is 400% worth it.
Sulky Seraph
2009-11-07 . chapter 1
I loved this story, even though Zemyx isn't my favorite pairing. Zexion was so dense it was hilarious, and I think you did a great job!
Minikimii
2009-10-15 . chapter 1
Demyx, Demyx, you wonderful man. -laughs- I love Zemyx so much. X3


You're amazing~
-Minikimii
Dancing.Melody-69
2009-09-20 . chapter 1
Holy shnitzlez.
I need a sequel, because this was way too cute o.o
LEMONYY SEQUELL, PLEZZ?
Other than that; INSTANT FAVE~ loveedd it, humor and all.
& God, Zexion wasn't the only one who got nervous around a shirtless Demyx...sept, he saw him, I imagined him xP ♥
Alstarryn
2009-09-16 . chapter 1
Very cute. I adore Demyx almost as much as Axel. Speaking of, what did Axie do to make Roxas beat him up?
Himitsu no Tenshi
2009-08-22 . chapter 1
omg, rofl. i like.
~Evelynn
aznwhitekid
2009-08-09 . chapter 1
AH THIS IS THE CUTEST ZEMYX I'VE EVER READ I LOVE IT
Pretty Soldiers
2009-08-06 . chapter 1
That was so amazing! Definitely laughed out loud a couple times - the little Axel Roxas scenes were too funny.
You write Zexion and Demyx perfectly!
libaka
2009-04-01 . chapter 1
I LOVE ZEMYX!! so cute. :D
thanks for writing!
SEED41269
2009-03-30 . chapter 1
This was so very cute! =D I love how the plot plays on the stereotypical romance formula. I also love how you wrote Zexion and Demyx. Oh, and Axel and Roxas hanging out in the background were very entertaining!
LiteraryMirage
2009-02-07 . chapter 1
Oh man, this was pure awesome love! Fantastic job!
Nuppi
2008-09-10 . chapter 1
I met a woman from San Francisco today in Helsinki while I was trying on a pair of Guess pumps. And speaking to her just made me think about you. I got inspired to review. (It sure was hilarious helping her pull super tight boots off her feet). Americans (and Canadians) are about five times more approachable than Finns. Five minutes into casual conversation and I was giggling with her.

Anyway, about this Zemyx fic. Love it. I think it has that same sort of humor as Signs. I can't put my finger on it; it's something. Maybe it's the way you manage to show the amusing side of tedious chores. Like arranging books. I tried getting a job at a prank store. Didn't get it. And I was so looking forward to putting the rows of fake dog poop into order.

You always make Zexion's hair reflect his mood. If it's behing his ear, he's willing to be sociable and he's content. When it's over his face, well.. he's unhappy or just wants to shield himself. It's in Waiting and With You, Suddenly.

"-- he was, if not in love with the affable idiot, at least very deeply in like." The Affable Idiot. Where did you get that? I mean, it'd make a brilliant name for a play or a book. (Which reminds me, I saw a book called A Spot of Bother at a store today. It weirded me out, to say the least. I might buy it).

One of my favourite, favourite bits is the one where Demyx decides to mock the Harlequin. Because it's in character and playful, and because I did just the same to the Bible. When I was eight. One of the proudest moments of my life.

And when Zexion walks in to find a very shirtless Dem, that made me crack up, because just last summer I went to play a little tennis with a friend and it just happened that my 2-year-old serious crush was there. Practicing. Shirtless. And he was sweaty and glistening, and did I mention he's absolutely ripped? I think I missed over half the balls my friend sent my way. Damn him and his happy trail. And his habit of coming way too close to chat. And I thought I'd finally escape his annoying charm by moving over 500 kilometres (that's well over 300 miles) away from my hometown and HIM. Lord behold, he moves, too. To the same goddamn capital area. Fate's a bitch.

I am getting seriously side-tracked, again. This is what happens when you're cooped up in the same flat with your father, with no friends within 300 miles. Except that guy. But his calendar is full for two weeks straight.

It's funny how Zexion, despite his superior intellect, is actually not good at reading the obvious messages. Denial, I say. Or maybe he just isn't that confident a person. But I also think it's.. unique how Demyx is never intimidated by Zexion's coolness or smarts. You write a care-free Demyx without making him an air-headed fool. A lot of others do just that.

Your comedy is a mature kind of comedy. Maybe that's what I wanted to say all along.
fYr3 ph03nix
2008-08-26 . chapter 1
That was REALLY cute. I love fics where Zexion is totally clueless. XD Makes it even awesome-er. Anyway, my brain isn't really functioning properly so I'll leave it at that.
rascality
2008-08-25 . chapter 1
That was perfect! Sweet and funny - Demyx's Valentines 'celebration' was absolutely inspired!
november.eyes
2008-08-25 . chapter 1
That was, by far, the most adorable story I have ever read. Personally I didn't think you could mesh Demyx and Zexion together so well without there being ... I donno, undisgused topics or something concerning their outlooks on life. But this! This I loved to read XD

Totally fav worthy
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