  dbzlover8 1/9/02 . chapter 1 man that was good exept i hate gene starwind he doesent deserve melfina hes had sex so may times the condoms run from his droaurs please dont e mail me and say that im an ass i figured that out a while ago(i laugh quitley while crying damnet) |
| Anon Ymous 12/26/01 . chapter 1 excellent |
| mama-sama 12/26/01 . chapter 1 that was very nice. |
 light blue 10/8/01 . chapter 1I love it! GREAT JOB! Please keep up the good work! _ |
| randi brown 10/6/01 . chapter 1 MELFINA AND GENE FOREVER! gO GET HER GENE! |
| Rio 10/3/01 . chapter 1 wow how sweet! Um, please write more. |
| Evets O' Rourke 9/30/01 . chapter 1 Pretty good. I liked it. |
| DUDE 9/30/01 . chapter 1 SWEET! |
| Phoenix Flower 9/30/01 . chapter 1 This is so kawaii. I love G/M. This is a very nice fic. |
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