Just an idea to run through the mill here, so to speak, but I think this is great. My idea for you is just one that I think would be interesting. How about if you make a fallow-up to this? It might be interesting to see how Kushina would grow in Naruto's life, as well as to see if Naruto could help her with what I assume to be her grief/mental breakdown? I don't know, just a thought...

Interesting. ^_^

This story makes me want to cry TT-TT. It's a really sad story ,but in a good way.

This is one of the best takes on this idea that I've seen in a long time. You portrayed the emotion really well. Excellent work! :)

love it!

this is it?

Wow, that was really deap. I loved. Sucks to see Kushina sink that low.

that was really sad :(

Aww...that is so sweet! It's definitely a different - but refreshing - twist on the "Naruto finds out about his parents" story line.

OMG that was so amazing!! Good job! :)

Sort of bittersweet beauty calls out from this. I like it.

It is good so far

This is the first story I've read where Naruto's mother is still alive, or really even mentioned at all. Thank you for giving her character other than a passing pretty broodmare.

Mm...A little too sad for me to truly enjoy. I'm not too fond of angst (but that's just my personal opinion). However, this is a very unique concept. And I can tell it's written very well. It's still just not my style...

Wow... really good. Original, and I agree with you that the Yondaime is being done to death. It's nice to see a story with Kushina - she deserves more spotlight.
This story was really touching - thanks!