xxkoffeexx 2008-04-17 . chapter 1Very nice! The part in this fic that really caught my attention was when Tsuna popped into the future--it was everything we'd seen and read before, but told in Gokudera's view. You did a very good job filling in the gaps with his thoughts (whereas we had Tsuna's confused thoughts). When Gokudera realized he had a second chance, I almost felt his relief and determination. "Redemption" is indeed a fitting title. ^^ Great job! |