Reviews for The End of Days

Devi Lethe 2008-04-21 ch 4,	abuseI like this last chapter best. Very sinister. My only criticism would be D's emotions seeming a bit too transparent. While D does give off subtle clues to what he's thinking or feeling, they are ordinarily very subtle. I'd recommend making them a bit harder to discern in the interest of canon-characterization. Of course if that's not what you're interested in that's fair and in the bounds of the story he can be as transparent as you like. I'm interested in hearing more about Dalkin and find the interactions with him quite interesting from the perspective of D's treatment. It must be interesting to interact with a female body and the knowledge that it is a man.
sunkissedvampire 2008-04-17 ch 4,	abuseA bit confuesed by the women/man thing, lol. But totally love it, cant wait for more!!
sunkissedvampire 2008-04-17 ch 1,	abusebravo! cant ait, I love it! hope you plan on updateingsoon!