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Nice! I think the story was beautiful and they were kept pretty in-character... That is good! :) But it is Shukaku not Shikaku... You did a great job! Beautiful style!

You did more then okay, that was fantastic :) A very well done Gaara that I'm looking forward to reading more about.

It is pretty good. Gaara's mindset was on point. However it is Shukaku no Shikaku.