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Sousou Moutoku
2009-10-21 . chapter 20
yo

theres a lot time, lucky!!
thanks for the chapter,
you are the one
ajajaja
continue, is the best...
JohnPeacekeeper
2009-10-20 . chapter 20
“You have good intentions but forcing them on others is no different from evil.”

How many times has that popped up? Well, it's definitely the theme here.
HeroGuardian
2009-10-20 . chapter 20
Nice chapter. So Chigusa learned the truth about the world. It must be difficult though since she doesn't remember Yuji. Hecate and Kazumi are a great team when they're synchronized. Shana seems to have gotten through to him for a second, but those new enemies are going to cause more problems...
karasu-000
2009-10-05 . chapter 19
I can't stop crying...~wah~ nice story =D
Timeless Echolocation
2009-09-08 . chapter 19
Marigold Valkyrie... that's a fitting title to call Kazumi after becoming a Crimson Lord.

Johan had seen Pheles lose her temper before such that he would rather be beaten up and crucified for singing “Ave Satani (Latin: Hail Satan)” in the middle of a church mass full of Catholic extremists and the religious Inquisition members of the Roman Catholic Church than face her wrath.

LMFAO! That's quite an exaggeration in regards to Johan's worst fear being Pheles's wrath.

Quite a trend in seeing that Shana, Kazumi, Margery, Hecate, and Pheles being more powerful than their respective love interests. Of course, Yuji is the exception for now due to SotF.
HeroGuardian
2009-09-08 . chapter 19
Well done. It looks like the final battle is coming up. It'll be interesting to see how everyone takes a part in this battle, especially Shana.
JohnPeacekeeper
2009-09-07 . chapter 19
Very philosophical on the flowers thing. Nice touch.

Now we have three key pieces to redeeming Yuji: SHana, Johan and his mom. All that's left is Kantaro.

And so they prepare for the final battle, with Shana on the front lines and Johan replacing Yuji as strategist. Speaking of which, I look forward to the tactical clash between the two strategic Mystes. I wonder what kind of tricks and traps each side will pull.
HeroGuardian
2009-06-23 . chapter 18
Great chapter. It looks like Yuji's still going to ty implementing the plan. It'll be interesting to see how they plan on stopping him.
JohnPeacekeeper
2009-06-22 . chapter 18
Even in defeat, the Snake of the Festival is an extremely dangerous enemy. This was probably all a Xanatos Gambit.

Whenever I read about Yuji being like this, I can't help but liken him to Vader.

I wonder how they will defeat/redeem him?

Awesome chapter.
Timeless Echolocation
2009-06-06 . chapter 17
Things started off a bit off sync but slowly started getting better.

Anyways, keep at it.
JohnPeacekeeper
2009-05-25 . chapter 17
Cool battle. I'm kind of disappointed though that the Snake of the Festival went down too quickly.

I am curious as to what happens to Yuji next.
HeroGuardian
2009-05-24 . chapter 17
That was an awesome battle. I'm glad to see that Xuan made it out safely, so he could return to Kazumi. Nice chapter!
Sousou Moutoku
2009-05-15 . chapter 16
Well, I only can say: the best to the best.
FromSouthamerica I'm your fan number 1, I just have only one ask, Continue, plis, the rest of my ife depend of this, after a end like the second season, at last I found a history with future...

Onegai shimazu, continue it...
HeroGuardian
2009-04-27 . chapter 16
Well done. Yuji might be separated from the Sairei no Hebi, but it's not over yet.
JohnPeacekeeper
2009-04-26 . chapter 16
So Yuji's free now.

When he wakes up, I can kinda picture a scene like the one where (like in Star Wars Episode I) the hero has a choice whether to defeat the Big Bad or kill his old allies to protect the ones he cares for most.

Either way, it would be an awesome battle.
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