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| That-Alien-Thing 2008-09-04 ch 20,  | abusefanfic messes up my smileys |
| That-Alien-Thing 2008-09-04 ch 21, | abuseI say tonks! good job! I got no homework today! and I 'm happy! _ ( . . ) | .. | ( \__/ ) ` |
| Lillie136 2008-08-18 ch 21, | abuseJESSICA> "Im sure will be seeing each other very soon!">?! |
| guymary41281 2008-08-18 ch 21, | abusei liked it! |
| Myene 2008-08-15 ch 21, | abuseThisis a very good sotry. That you were able to do this at your ages piont to a very promissing life as writer. |
| Myene 2008-08-15 ch 7, | abuse"Now, I may be a 7th grader taking 8th grade math," Wow, so youa re..what, 13? Nice work! |
| GiGiFanFic 2008-08-06 ch 21, | abuseI finally finished reading the fic. I really liked it, but once more must say that you need to brush up on your spelling and phrasing a lot. good fun fic though. |
| GiGiFanFic 2008-08-06 ch 14, | abusewhat does this mean? "and the sun had already and set now". Yes you are typing too fast, and yes you should pay attention to choice 1 and 2. You,ll be sorry if you don,t. Surgery means a period of time in a soft cast and or heavy bandages. Please do take better care of yourself. I care cause I,m a great/grandmom. |
| GiGiFanFic 2008-08-06 ch 9, | abuseI haven,t checked your reviews,so have no idea if anyone else spotted the mistake or not, but Harry,s badge should be QC not CC. You spelled the sport right but flubbed on the badge. |
| GiGiFanFic 2008-08-06 ch 6, | abuseI know the fic is done, but you should really re-read your own work and check your spelling and words in inappropriate parts of the sentences. Don,t trust spell check as they will try to correct like sound words such as definitely. The word is not def'i'antly,so if you write another fic, do try to be more careful in all your spelling. You have good ideas, and this is a fun fic. I can see Moony knowing about all the properties however, and it was fun to see the teens reaction to he and Tonks. |
| GiGiFanFic 2008-08-06 ch 4, | abuseJust nit-picking, but a crab only turns red after it is cooked. Fun fic though. |
| GiGiFanFic 2008-08-05 ch 1, | abuseGood start, but I can,t believe you left out Tonks and Moony from Sirius,s will. |
| Gater-girl 2008-07-28 ch 9, | abuseGreat story so far, one question: How do you get CP from Quidditch captain? Surely it should be QC |
| sanyal 2008-07-23 ch 9, | abuseHarry paused to see if she would add another question. When she didn’t he spoke up again. “Milady, would you care to do me the honor of being this humble peasant’s boyfriend? ^ finally somebody got it right, Ginny Weasely the "BOY" friend !! |
| Dreamweaver 2008-07-18 ch 21, anon. | abuseI'm surprised that when Hermione and Jessica were talking about Jess having ministry emlployees show their forearms before entering the building, that one particular idea didn't occur to Herms. Like they do for airports and government buildings, create something similar to metal detectors, only with a spellwork to detect Dark magic energies. With that, they wouldn't have to worry about DeathEaters just moving the Mark to another part of the body and they'd also get just regular bad guys who weren't D.E.s trying to get in with enspelled weapons. |