awesome story! i really liked it!

aw - so cute! i love the OC of Sara - she seems really sweet & fun to be around :)

from,
here comes the concrete angel

I liked it, is there more?
Two things though;
ONE- I think Roger would think about Mimi morre than just the first paragraph.
Two- don't always explain what everyone is wearing, unless it's important, it's only making the story a tad bit boring. But, besides that, it's great!