 Yasha-rai 2009-08-12 . chapter 1That was so nice! I enjoyed that! I still say you need a beta because I freak out a little bit every time I see "Ohayoo" God, that is so weird looking! Plus you put "pute" instead of "pout" which, honestly, made for a kinda freaky typo. xD But I'm not here to be a grammar nazi. Once again, I did enjoy this chapter. I'm glad you wrote little spin-off one shots for the main story, and eventually I'm going to read them all! |