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Reviews for: A Cute Story
cynicismsequal
2009-08-15 . chapter 1
aww this is cute :D
Yasha-rai
2009-08-12 . chapter 1
That was so nice! I enjoyed that! I still say you need a beta because I freak out a little bit every time I see "Ohayoo" God, that is so weird looking! Plus you put "pute" instead of "pout" which, honestly, made for a kinda freaky typo. xD But I'm not here to be a grammar nazi. Once again, I did enjoy this chapter. I'm glad you wrote little spin-off one shots for the main story, and eventually I'm going to read them all!
Lady Blade WarAngel
2008-04-21 . chapter 1
Cute story Shinigami-Chan.
twiggy-shino
2008-04-18 . chapter 1
lol a perv like shibi! lol lol lol that's great...geez...what made ya want to write this story? or is it a oneshot? im addicted to it again.

i hope i get homework done soon...
kawaiiitahina123
2008-04-18 . chapter 1
So sweet!
Re-L-sama
2008-04-17 . chapter 1
AW! That was so cute! Good Job ^__6
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