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| slynn64 2008-06-20 ch 6,  | abuseHello there! I like your story.You haven't posted for a while. Are you going to finish the story? Don't leave us hanging! |
| Misplaced Angel 2008-06-03 ch 6, | abusenice... good idea :) update soon please |
| a step into the Light 2008-05-30 ch 6, | abuseawe! Andreas is so sweet and romantic! nice job! |
| MeshiGohiku 2008-05-30 ch 6, | abusedon't we all wish we could have a mate like that...aawwee cute...well on with the next chapter. |
| slynn64 2008-05-29 ch 5, | abuseI am enjoying this story very much. The beginning was a very unique start-how Layla read about the Carpathians in a romance novel. The story flows very well. I haven't noticed any inconsistencies yet. Every chapter is like a clifthanger. I am anxious for the next installment. Keep up the good work. I'll be reading you. |
| KikiPet 2008-05-28 ch 5, | abuseI really love the idea of a Carpathian male finding his lifemate amongst, shall we say, the more realistic people! Thanks for writing it. Doing well so far, and I am looking forward to seeing more! K.P. |
| sarcasmbecomesyou 2008-05-28 ch 5, | abusehaha cute chapter...layla definitely wears the pants in the relationship lol |
| mistylove 2008-05-28 ch 5, | abusethis is getting good.good job |
| MeshiGohiku 2008-05-21 ch 4, | abusewell first person pov makes it interesting would love to learn more. keep up the good work. |
| boogabooga13 2008-05-20 ch 4, | abuseoh now that was funny! what happens? does she scare the living hell out of him? lol :) I LOVE IT! |
| mistylove 2008-05-20 ch 4, | abuseThis is wonderful.How is she going to be changed?Shesaid she had no psychic abilities,but she did resist his voice. |
| x emmalisa x 2008-05-16 ch 2, | abuseThis was an amazing mix of hilarious humour, and so sweet romance! I laughed so much at this: “You doubt I exist?” he asked. “Well, duh" And in many other places... I love her personality. :) And he is way too sweet and romantic! Wonderful chapter... :) x |
| x emmalisa x 2008-05-16 ch 1, | abuseWow! I am really loving this story... So I had to review. I love her personality, that she is just like the rest of us who read the stories... :) Well done... x |
| FlyingismyPassion 2008-05-14 ch 4, | abuseI LOVE this story!! Can't wait to read more! |
| Astrophysics Rock 2008-05-13 ch 4, | abuseI love Layla! She's great and I love that last line. "I said I'd be yours, but I never said I'd be submissive!" love it! please update soon. |