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Reviews for: 50 Sentences For Matt and Mohinder
Moon Lovegood
2008-05-25 . chapter 1
I like it.
Amorye
2008-04-21 . chapter 1
Beautifully done! Keep it up. These were some of my favorites:

The kisses Matt left on Mohinder’s skin were like silent promises of things to come, and they made the beautiful Indian man squirm beneath him and reciprocate with promises of his own.

They never had to ware masks around each other; they could be honest.

Hope, it was the only thing that the three of them could hold onto; hope that the next day would be normal and that there would be no threats of power hungry killers or viruses that would take out the world’s population, hope that they could simply be the happy family that the three of them had dreamed of for so long.
HanuuEshe
2008-04-19 . chapter 1
This was beautiful :D
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