Aw, sweet and sexy :P

Love it. It's odd, even though I know Malik doesn't belong in the Ancient Egypt area of the fandom, I love it when he's put in there XD He and Thief King Bakura (Is he actually called Akefia/Touzokou? I'm not sure :/) just seem to match XD

Oh wow, this is brilliant! Cute and with a nice blend of drama, especially that last part. I really liked it, which is surprising since I tend to not like Ancient Egypt stories as much. But again, this was really good and I loved it!

good lord, this is absolutely incredible. i love it. i love the scenes with malik and bakura and just...well...everything! i loved how you portrayed malik's personality and why he was the way he was. it was so atmospheric too, i just wanted it to go on forever. you're amazing, nuff said.

loved it.

I liked it ^_^
I really love this pairing, but this was really well written too
:D

I really loved this. The way you wrote Malik was espically intersting as we got to see a bit of his sadistic side.

Malik and Bakura is the best pairing ever!! I especially enjoy reading stories where Malik lived in ancient Egypt. Those two always had such a special conncection that you can see from watching them in Battle City, that it makes sense that they had met long before...in ancient times. I always imagined Malik to be a sort of royal renegade, so therefore he would have sympathy for Bakura, unlike the other royals who regarded Bakura as scum. I like it how you did that in this story.

Excellent!! Yes, it was just GREAT!! that's all.. Great!!

One of my favorite pairings.. (I like conspire so any mixture of those characters rocks)

You really managed to get into each character in less than a novel; amazing. You are a very talented writer. :)

Oh wow amazingly well written! I loved the way the first two paragraphs were written, the words that were used. I would rephrase my favorite parts but then I'd have to copy paste the entire thing xD I also really loved how the word "pathetic" was put on a separate line, it strengthened it in some way.
I don't like romance in general, the type of overly mushy fangirlish stuff, so this was definitely worth reading. Nothing was rushed, it all flowed very naturally.
So, yeah, it was hot

i love it:) its cute

what an amazing story! I really like this paring it's really cute, I really liked this story, its really good for only you're second fic. Good job! :D

Wow that was great! You get even more points for it being a second yaoi! I loved it so much! :D

Oh how beautilful^^ I love this story X3 Bakura x Malik is so good.

Oh wow i loved it it would have been nice if it was a little longer but it was good. :) Keep up the good work

OMG that was amazing! you are a wonderful yaoi writer!! i wish you would write more! it's fantastic!