Interesting. Not much I can say, since it's -no offense- so short, but I feel that you have an interesting idea here and I would LOVE to see it develop. I pray for an update, but don't rush.:) I shall be following this story, even if I may not review, so you can count on this reader. Until you introduce romance. heh heh.

really good idea. some flaws but every story has those, and i couldn't do any better XD. i'd like to see where this goes, you should continue it. hope to read it in the future!

I like the beginning of the story. Looking forward for more of the fic.

COOL

PMS!

i belive i found the clip you where talking about at /watch?v=7_IRRww9UBY&feature=related

this is a brilliant idea i thught that have been like any other time travel story but it was notit was unique.

good fic

this would be an extremly interesting story I hope you update it soon, but the Rinnegan would be a better explenation for the bodies and Hinata would be God's Angel plus no madara.

love it so far please continue writing chapters for this story as soon as you can

HOLY SHINIGAMI that was good for 'bout a page worth? Keep workin' on it

naruto is pein! thats different.

Powerful, graphic, intense... AMAZING!

Honestly, the imagery of eternal war and unquenchable thirst for battle was awesome... You might want to up the rating, the concept of using bloodline people as breeding machines are a bit too graphic for just teen.

The twist of Naruto's mother doing the sealing disguised as the Fourth was also something cool, and maybe you can go in depth about that in the later chapters.

Now, it's all just a shade of grey. There's no black and white, good or evil, because Naruto is willing to kill anyone or anything for the sake of making the world/future better. Just like the saying, "The path to Hell is paved with good intentions".

I like this story so far, and I hope you continue.

Wow! That's a wonderfully original concept. Can't wait to see the rest update soon, please! :)

Yeah, I saw that video.

It was kind of cool.

And so is this.

O. M. G. This sounds GREAT! Continue ASAP nao plox, un?