very beautiful

Very poetic and loved every detail. Dark, emotionally powerful and moving. Loved the imaginary, keep it up.

Dark but beautiful, and your imagery is stunning. A truly unusual and lovely piece. My only suggestion is to read over it one more time to catch those little things"it's" versus "its" and minor things like that. Well done!

ohhh is that it ?

damn...this fic is like, a work of art. literally. the imagery is a wonderful. the fog-like gown...it's just really sweet. wonderful:D

That was really good. loved the imagery.

Very poetic. Seems to come straight from the unconscious-I'm jealous of that. I very much liked the "Your Touch Destroys Me" series, too-powerful,emotional stuff. Thanks for sharing it.

This is really cool! I doubt that they will do anything as cool on the show.

Love the fairy-tale imagery of this. Very cool.)

Very original i like it